10 | Spidy Senses

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So lets jump right into this.

So we all know peter has spider senses and all, but with us not being Spider-Man, we have no idea what it's like

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So we all know peter has spider senses and all, but with us not being Spider-Man, we have no idea what it's like.

All we know and all we write is: the hair on his arm raised

So heres whats likely to happen. In short, his senses will overwhelm him.

When he gets that little arm hair raise, and this is where I start disagreeing with the movie, all it shows is that he has a spidy-sense thing, but it doesn't show what he feels.

I imagine he feels, as quoted by our beloved one, like everything's been dialed to 11. Things are louder, he can see every detail, every sound, every moment, every smell, every taste, ext...

 Things are louder, he can see every detail, every sound, every moment, every smell, every taste, ext

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FUN FACT:
spider-man gets a headache as a warning. the severity of it depends on the threat its self.

Peter is intaking more information and input than usual, so while he can normally only see down the street, now he can see every little sign on the street, every human, every face, every tiny detail.

Everything is loud to him, and it all echos and pounds in his head like in those movies where voices starts to echo.

He feels everything. He feels his sock, he feels the sweat beading on his forehead. He feels the hairs on his arm raise, he feels the ominous feeling deep in his stomach, ect...

Last thing...you just have to add more detail to it. The best books don't have the best plot, they have the best imagery. Make it real. Put yourself in his shoes, that's all.



Oh and if you write a book plz comment so I can read it!!!

Oh and if you write a book plz comment so I can read it!!!

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