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This one isn't all to fun of a chapter...
Yeah, yeah, we all get our prompts and we enjoy them and get so into them that we go over our heads and forget to wonder just how realistic our writing is.
(But that was old me new me is thinking wow ur being mean it's a book it doesn't have to make perfect sense it's their own imagination leave the lovely writers alone)
I'm not saying I'm experienced in everything because if that was the case then you'd be reading a 1,000 year olds book, but your not. I'm saying sure I'm not the most advanced in areas, but if I remember I stop to make sure my character isn't reacting to figuring out peter is Spider-Man by saying "oh wow I honestly can't believe your Spider-Man you must be joking."
Not "at"ing anyone...
If your character doesn't like being lied to, then they might go ultimate Bork bork mode and yell at peter and push him away. If your character is obsessed with Spider-Man like a complete geek (COUGH COUGH NED) they might be super excited or in complete disbelief like he actually has to web her hand up and she's all like "lol buddy you realize I could make that string just as well as you can we're both super smart." Then he would proceed to showing the suit and she's like "wow ur a bigger fan boy than me..." and he just gives up.
Anyway what I'm trying to get at is that THEY ARE YOUR CHARACTER DO WHATEVER THE HECK YOU WANT WITH THEM IF YOU WANT THEM TO BE AN ANGRY CRIER THEN GO AHEAD IF YOU WANT THEM TO COPE BY SHUTTING EVERYONE OUT YOU DO YOU BOO!
(Older me out here thinking sis what is u doing that has no relation to the topic hun...)
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I realize we like to put abusive dads and parents who fight or alcoholic fathers and dead mothers such and such believe me it's a good prompt even I think of it, but this is where my experience and knowledge and a lil but of science comes in.
When someone is drunk they aren't always drunk. They'll start drinking but they have to drink a lot before they start getting angry. Beer has a low alcohol percentage meaning it'll take a while before the drinker starts getting bad.
Also, if the person is badly affected by alcohol then they're perfectly normal when their not drinking it. For instance, your OC might wake up in the morning and her father WILL be fine, usually drinkers don't drink until lunch, and even if they started right when they woke up we would go back to the last paragraph. Anyway, they wake up and their fathers fine. He's happy, up and at it, ready to mow the lawn or drive his daughter to school, but the day'll get progressively worse, it's not a 'out of nowhere' thing, same with them hurting your OC and automatically being sorry. It doesn't work like that.
Many times if parents are fighting kids see it as embarrassing and try and ignore it or hide it from their friends it's very hard living with it. They won't do anything while it's happening and won't after but they might yell at the one causing it unless their in their older childhood stage and three might act out and pepper spray or threaten to call the cops.
Kids who grow up in this kinda environment have problems. They become more hostile.
Also be careful what u write bc it can offend ppl, ok? (:
And chill out I'm fine I have a psychology book
ANYWAYS: If ur gonna write look it up on Pinterest believe me almost all my stuff comes from Pinterest!!!
make👏🏼sure👏🏼ur👏🏼writing👏🏼right👏🏼
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