The only D you need is a doctor

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Ever noticed how the main character will just black out for no reason ? Most stories start with her waking up and they end with her blacking out
Sometimes for ridiculous reasons?

Get yelled out = black out
Get kissed = black out
Get stared at = black out
Breathe = black out

The bitch needs to see a doctor not get dick if she's passing out every chapter they're might but something seriously wrong with her like have you noticed...
...

"He stared into my eyes moved his body close to mine as he was about to steal my first kiss the world went black "

It's so overused it's just a basic way to end a chapter it' definitely not a cliffhanger and so unrealistically NO ONE I MEAN NO ONE can pass out that easy and that much without having major medical problems

And what's the deal with the main character always sleeping ?

"Even tho I was about to die I fell so easily into a dreamless sleep "

Come on bitch I love my sleep but you can't sleep 23 hours a day drink a cup of coffee and give us some plot

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