So this chapter is a about romance stories that move to fast and get boring really fast
It's pretty cliche tho how fast characters fall in love
Like the love interest takes one look at the basic bitch and wants to make her his queen/wife like can you actually see anyone doing that other than a lunatic stalker even than it's unrealistic like in mafia stories I guessing in real life these men don't trust easy or act so stupid because basic bitch looked at them or took their coffee order like for example....
"I looked up into those innocent doe eyes and I knew she'd be the queen to my empire and when she bit that plump lip she was mine and only mine "
You see how cringy that sounds ?
If you're going to have the guy be this smart well educated cunning CEO or mafia king even a criminal master mind at least make them smart and mysterious rather than a cringy weirdo that belongs in a mental hospital
The basic bitch does a basic bitch she goes from being Scared to being so relaxed around this usually dangerous guy so easily I just want to physically shake her than she goes from hating him to dropping her granny panties in the space of a 1-2 chapters
A slow burn is a best burning especially when the whole story is about them getting together if you have the characters fall in love and get all mushy in the first few chapters not only is it cliche but it makes the whole story boring they're together what else is gonna happen I don't wanna spend my time reading cliche romantic and cringy smut for 20 chapters
Especially if the story is dark because the basic bitch and main love interest need character development, chemistry and at least time to like eachother
YOU ARE READING
That's so cliche
HumorI decided to write this book about stupid overused cringy things that happen in wattpad stories believe me there's a lot of them out there so sit back relax and prepare to laugh at all the things that are so cliche
