That's so cliche

Bitch make up your mind

Hey guys I wanna talk about the basic personalities of the main characters in this chapter

So let's get started

I've noticed the main girl will have one of two personalities sometimes I wonder does anyone ever act like this like seriously ??

Personality one

The first one is the basic of basic the whiplash personality she'll go from being a quiet pushover to a badass that doesn't know how to shut her mouth in a matter of sentences to a quiet mouse again for example she'll go from taking shit from literally the whole school to spitting in the face of a serial killer who has a knife to her best friends throat ever though bitch shut the fuck up or were was that fighting spirt a few minutes ago ?? Like I've seen a shit ton of people commenting on multiple stories how irritating that is
why is she allowing another girl who's her age to bully her yet she's not afraid of a guy with a gun to her head it makes zero sense in love stories they'll go from hating a guy to literally being his best bitch just in a matter of a chapter a lot of times the main character seems bipolar so if you want a character shy and quiet stick to that if you want her a smart mouth badass stick to that be Also make it realistic to make her look more human
But if you want to change her personality because that's part of the story do it slowly and throughout the story not just in a matter of sentences because more than likely people we'll go "not this shit again I swear I can never find a good read " so ether make a different story for all her different personalities or just leave her with one

Personality two the annoying 5 year old I can't tell you how many stories I've just said not to day satan and changed because of this!
I hate a whinny bratty childish main character who is ether in her teens or 20s who acts like she's 5 like wft is with the childish behaviour it's not cute it doesn't make the character look innocent she looks dumb asf tbh
Is she does things like stick out her tongue 👅 giggle like a dumb shit 😂 go around overhyped like a 5 year old the day after Halloween 👻 or just childish comebacks like meanie I'm sorry idc how good the plot is I can't read a story about a cringy teen girl or 20 something woman who acts and talks like she's fucking five i think what a lot of writers think it makes the character look like the innocent virgin overused stereotype that's so old and boring but it just makes her annoying

For next it's the main boys turn
The main boy usually is so fucking bipolar or cringy
He goes one sentence his a playboy stalker psycho than bang the worlds greatest boyfriend......THATS BULLSHIT people don't change just like that especially if he's been acting that way all his life so your basic bitch isn't gonna change him with a single kiss or tear! even Disney doesn't pull shit like this the best stories on here have the girl change the boys outlook on life over time or he tries and fails multiple times better himself because his been basically a cunt his whole life there's nothing more boring than a bad boy who turns into a pussy in a matter of seconds it kills the whole story if the guy is an asshole keep him one or if part of the story is him changing his ways make it slow that's what we want we want him to mess up and try again it gives greats twists and drama because let's be real most readers keep readings for the love interest