Flawed: Part 2

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~A-alright so let's just ignore how long the first part was compared to the most recent upload. I guess we can go ahead and jump in. This may be 5/6 parts long. I really like killing people? This story is similar to another.... Oh well.~

Another note: yo... death in this. And some stuff that doesn't really make sense but hey! This is fiction!

Madi felt very guilty, yet she felt satisfied. It was as if a murderous rage had consumed her in that moment. She even gets a little queasy at times, but when she thinks about it more the hungrier she got. She used the term hungry because it was the closest feeling that reminded her of the strange feeling. 

It had been a few days before the feeling came back, and it was stronger.

Julian had been helping Abby after her boyfriend's disappearance. Madi was fine with it, for a while. She had to take Dan down to the office because he had a really bad asthma attack, so she was able to skip a part of 4th block. So, she was almost the the class, until she heard some voices at the stairwell. The door was closed, so she could hear people but couldn't really see them.

"It's okay, can you tell me what's wrong?" A female voice questioned, sounding calm yet a strange tone in her voice that Madi knew.

"It's just... I really really love her, okay? And the fact she's still hung up on Godoy just gets me fucking pissed." Another voice said, anger rising in her voice. She had to have been talking about Abby. The 'feeling' rose in Madi's chest again.

"Well, she is your friend." The female voice reminded him, as Madi finally matched the tone with someone she knew.

"I know, I just wish I could tell her how much I love her." The second voice said, seeming joyous. If the female voice was who Madi guessed, than she knew her next target.

Madi walked into her class, sitting silently. Until the door opened, confirming her prediction. Jaz walked in with Julian trailing behind her, they both sat in their seats and returned to their conversations with their other friends. Of course, she knew that this time it wouldn't give her as much guilt as Godoy.

'If you killed her, they wouldn't question you at all.' A voice seemed to echo in her mind like an ear worm. 

That night, she had grabbed a bunch of things and threw them in a bag. Rope, a pocket knife, gas, matches, you know the usual. Then she slept. That morning, she got her bag and told her grandparents she was going to sleep over at Dan's house. They didn't have to know about her plans. She didn't want them to know.

-

She had tiptoed her way around his neighborhood, enjoying the nice morning. That's when she looked at a door and seen the name, 'Noe', on the door. Bingo. Opening the door, she slip the bump key back into her bag. The cheap cotton gloves would bring no suspicion to her buying list and to people around her. Looking around, she found an easy place she could hide in the girl's room. She quickly locked the door as the car pulled into the driveway. By the time they had unlocked the door, she was laying hidden in her room. 

Waiting.

Waiting.

Waiting.

Waiting.

Waiting.

Until it was night. She spent the time thinking about the glorious way she would die. When she was sure he was fast asleep, she pushed out the fake wall and put it back. She had the few things she needed. Then she sat. She had a few more minutes before REM sleep was activated. 

Before REM stage there are 4 other cycles of sleep. If woken during the REM stage, it is possible to have a sleep paralysis dream. Looking up at the clock, she saw that it was time. Looking down at the sleeping girl, she grinned. Then punched her. Her eyes shot open, but she couldn't move. Her eyes widened in fear, as if she was seeing her demons come out as well as Madi. Her eyes showed panic, worry, fear. It made Madi feel happy. 

So, she lit the match. Jillian's eyes were jolting, pleading. 

As if she didn't hurt her in any way. 

As if she didn't ignore EVERYONE whenever she didnt get her way. 

When she easily blamed Madi for the reason Abby didn't love her back. 

With those thoughts racing in her mind, she dropped the match on her. That's when her eyes were filled with pain and anger. It filled Madi with delight. Taking one more glance, she gracefully opened the window and closed in on her way out. Taking account of everything she had, she grabbed a rock and broke the window open. Then, she threw the small gas canister inside. 

Then, she skipped into the small forest next to her house, proving that nobody would see her. 

-

"What the fuck are you doing here?" Dan asked tired, hanging out of his window. "It's fucking 2 in the morning." 

"Well, I was doing something. But if I tell you, you can't tell anyone. You got it?" Madi told him, threatening him with the pocket knife.

"Okay? What did you do? Kill Junior?" He asked joking. Then when he saw the happiness in her eyes, his face turned around. "You fucking killed someone?!?" 

"Well, I just.... she had forced Abby into so many horrible situations...." Madi threw on her act, bringing crocodile tears to her face. 

"Get the fuck in here." Dan sighed, pulling Madi into the room with him. Looking around, she saw it was a simple room. Bed next to bookshelf, dresser next to bed, the turtle tank next to the dresser, and a TV opposite of the bed. "You gotta get out of here before 10 am. That's when my step-dad's gonna wake me up." Madi nodded, keeping on her scene as Dan prepared a small bedding for her. 

"Thank you." Madi whispered, noting to herself to not tell him about Godoy. 

"We gotta stick up for each other. Especially since-" Dan was explaining before he stopped himself. "Wait. The last place Godoy was seen was with Abby. Maybe she killed him? No that wouldn't make sense, maybe he..." Dan was explaining before he couldn't even believe himself. How could someone as passionate as Madi kill her best friend's boyfriend? "Did you kill Godoy?" He asked her, looking into her eyes. Her eyes turned sour. That sad and scared look was gone. It was in Dan's eyes now as Madi's eyebrow furrowed, her expression completely changed.

"Dan, don't." Madi warned carefully making sure she had her pocket knife in her long sleeves. "We're friends, right? Really good friends." Madi reassured, nudging herself over to Dan.

"O-okay..... Abby was your friend, too. Why did yo-" Dan was cut of by Madi pushing him down. 

"Godoy was just in the way." Madi growled, pulling out the pocket knife. "He was in the way of my love." 

"Abby? You mean Abby, right? Look, I have nothing to do with that! So you could just let me go-" Dan was trying to explain.

"No." Madi said as Dan stated 'go'. "You know too much, too much information." Madi warned, looking at Dan and imagining his blood splattered everywhere.

"I can help you!" Dan tried to save himself, attempting to look for anything. "I can help you, I can get people for you!"

Madi was puzzled. She could use her friend's help. But, he could tell everyone. It would be nice to have someone to help her. "Fine." She complained, seeing the panic in his eye turn into surprise. "But one condition. You tell anyone, and Sheldon is dead." Madi threatened, pointing at the turtle tank.

"Okay.... Thank you." Dan sighed with relief, while Madi felt nothing. She noticed that she felt numb a lot more recently, unless it was killing or seeing Abby. Those seemed to be the only emotion that she could function. Dan held out his hand, offering the deal. Madi sighed, and shook it.

That night, you might be able to say that three souls were lost.

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