Hi guys.
I was thinking about stopping this story and just rewrite it.
I feel like its sloppy and half ass and rush. Feel like I need to add more detail and there was a lot I wanted to put in it but ended up not doing so.
I'd leave this up but I'll start from scratch same title and everything just hopefully better written.
Would you guys be okay with that? Would you guys read the rewritten little swan story?
I feel like I can do better and do better for my Evelyn character.
Idk what to do. I don't feel like I've done Evelyn justice or Embry's. I don't think the plot flows very well.
Idk what do you guys think?
Its 3am rn and I can't sleep and this has been on my mind. I'd really like some feed back.
Thank you.
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Little Swan Discontinued
Fanfictionin which Bella swan has a little sitter. twilight and new moon, Eclipse, breaking dawn part 1 #4 in imprint 07/17/18 #1 in romance 02/23/19
