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Review for starshades

Review by ThatOneDolphinGirl

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Title: 9/10
Blurb: 8/10
Plot: 8/10
Grammar: 7/10
Cover: 7/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10 

The title was amazing, but I didn't know what it meant until I started reading the book which is perfectly alright. Blurbs don't have all dialogue, they also have a paragraph explaining what happens. The plot was overall good, but I did find some problems with it. I found some grammar errors so I suggest reading over your chapters before publishing. The cover, the title was blurred a little bit so it was really hard to read. Overall, I really enjoyed this book!

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