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⁀➷Annie┋ Arrowed Heart✯

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Review for -carawrites

Review by Moiralete

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(Note: The review has been given according to the number of chapters requested by the author)

Cover (8/10):
I love the cover. The colour scheme is very nice. It gives a simple and warm feeling. I especially liked the girl in it. It depicts the protagonist so well. The only problem- fonts. The fonts used to write the title is not synchronizing at all. The word 'Arrowed' is looking congested a little bit to. I suggest you to please change the fonts. Otherwise, everything is nice.

Title (10/10):
Wow, nice title. It irked my mind instantly when I read it in the form. It got me thinking right that second. It is very unique. It suits the book too and kind of defines Gigi too, in my opinion. Great Job!

Description (5/10):
The description is good, but it can be better. The description you have written can be the concluding line of it. It is giving of heavy cliché vibes. Try to add more information about the protagonists to gain more attention of the readers. And try to add little bit of information about how they met or when they meet then something happens- things like these to gain more attention and make it look eye-catching.

Grammar (9/10):
Your grammar is nice. Correct use of tenses were there and punctuation marks and sentence formation was on point too. Only a little bit of grammar and spelling error was there, nothing big. 

Presentation (10/10):
Your presentation is nice. You are using title for naming the chapters really nice. It intrigues the mind of the reader what will happen in that particular chapter and some titles are funny as hell. You can make banners too for chapter headings or thanks for reading ones. It will make it look nicer and more welcoming. 

Writing Style (10/10):
Your writing style is amazing! I liked how you have expressed every scenario. You expressed emotions very nicely. Some writers are not able to do that with words, but you did. And the humour was on point too. I laughed a lot. I loved all the humour scenes Word choices are nice- not too simple or not too difficult for the readers to understand their meaning. The starting line was eye- catching too. Nice work.

Characters (19/20):
Your characters are very nice. They are well planned and structured. I really liked Gigi's character. She is not your usual 'broken girl because her father died'. She is a 'strong girl even after her dad died'. She comes out independent, strong and carefree. As for Arrow, I can't say much as he is introduced in the 7th chapter and you wanted me to read till that only so I compiled to that (partially) and am writing this review. But I can say this that he is coming out as a strong character. I only have one problem here- character description. Just give a little bit idea how the other characters look to have an image in our head.  Leaving this, everything is nice.

Plot (15/20):
The plot is interesting from the start.  It is captivating and different plot. I read the book till the end. But in the middle, it is getting off-direction. I mean, it is not leading to anything. And I personally think you should have introduced Arrow earlier and then the series of events and him popping in one time or two to get to know more about him and how Georgia and Arrow will look like a couple. Lead the thing to somewhere. I mean make a chain of events happening between them and other characters. And focus on Gigi's best friends more too to know about them.

Overall (86/100):
I liked the book. It is amazing and wonderful. I enjoyed reading your story. It's funny, making you frustrate with the characters and sometimes wanting to come over there and live the moment with them. I totally recommend it to others. Thank you for choosing me as your reviewer for letting me read this amazing story. Just try to make changes for things which I have pointed out and then we are good to go. Waiting for updates.
Thank You 😊

I sincerely apologize for the delay. But I hope it's worth it 🙂