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Cover: Amazing. It depicts the story and one can easily guess the genre of the book just by looking at it. The fonts, darkness of the butterfly and the look in her eyes speak for themselves. Thrilling and simply beautiful.
Title: It's intriguing and it absolutely mirrors the entire book. Mysterious, thrilling and somehow, without even reading the book, portrays suspense. Smart and it definitely give the brain something to munch on. Brilliant!
Description: Packed with curiosity and dipped in suspense. Draws out the excitement from a reader. Quite short, considerably detailed and sprinkled with subtle hints that's enough to make a person thirsty for more.
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuation: Grammar is well constructed and there are no spelling mistakes. Punctuation marks are all in the right places. These all contributed to the beautiful flow of the book.
Plot: Smooth flow, dripping with suspense at the end of every chapter. Unique use of words that makes the reader's heart beat fast with excitement as well as fear. Relatable rendition of characters due to the themes such as betrayal, lies, secrets, untrustworthyness and many more which also balances their imperfection.
It is realistic as the setting, characters and events are similar to real life. Plot pace is steady which keeps us wanting more. Superb!
Originality: Though many books have about high school murder has been written, this one is certainly unique in the way it was portrayed, coupled with the concept of the Butterfly Effect.
Neatness: Paragraphs and Sentence structure are on point. The detailed descriptions coupled with the images, teaser and trailer of the book all contributed to the beauty. Great work. However, there are some sentences that began with small letters instead of capital. Please look into those.
Personal Enjoyment: Reading this book is equal to watching a mysterious high school movie. I was hooked immediately I read the first chapter. I thoroughly enjoyed it and I'm waiting for more updates!
