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Title: Honestly, the story matches with the title and it actually made me curious about what is the plan. So, I think the title is good to go.
Cover: Frankly, your cover is beautiful, the font, elements, color, background, everything. But, the point is, at some point there is an un-saltiness in it. Like... Honestly, readers do judge a book by its cover and I'm not gonna lie, I do the same. I just you make your cover a little more attractive.
Blurb: Your blurb is PERFECT! It gives a little glimpse of Anastasia life and what she wants. There's just more or less in this and I love it.
Opening Chapter: Girl, your detailing on what the characters are feeling is awesome. At some point, I wanted to hit Anastasia father on his head, he's a jerk. I like Caspen character at some point in Opening Chapter. Honestly, I don't have a brother so I don't know what an overprotective brother feels like.
Grammer: There are few punctuation mistakes here and there. But, I think you can fix that up.
Overall Enjoyment: I love the time pace of the story, the royal things and stuff. There was a lot formality in your story which made me concentrate on words and detail. Honestly, if this book turn to a movie I'm so gonna watch it.
Note: Well, I just wanna say that, that your chapters are too long. I know nothing can be done. But, the only fault I think in your chapters are that they are too long. No offense, but at one point, I did feel bored because the chapter wasn't ending. Well, I think this is it ❤ All the best for the rest of your book❤❤
