⁀➷Asthas┋Emily+Elizabeth✯

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Review for Yehann0

Review by ThatOneDolphinGirl

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Title: 8/10
Blurb: 9/10
Plot: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Cover: 8/10
Overall enjoyment: 7/10 

The title is something predictable with love books, I would like to see something more unique! The blurb was really unique, and I only wish it was longer. The plot seemed like it was going too fast. You want the plot to be smooth, planning each chapter hinting at what will happen but not going too fast. I found some grammar errors, but not too many. Read your chapters over before publishing. Lastly, the tiny print above and below the title of the book on the cover I can't read at all. Otherwise, good job!

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