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Cover The first thing that caught my eye was HOPE MIKEALSON like damn girl, I'm gonna read all of it now (it's just the Originals stan inside me is speaking). Honestly, your cover is a little dark according to your plot. The cover is perfect but you should a little lighter shade, you know what I mean right.
Title Your book only has 3 chapters currently, so I don't know where everything is heading. I can't review the title just now so.....but I think it sounds good to me tho and I guess Jimin stick to the eternity thing.
Blurb: Frankly, the Blurb is awesomely written it was not too much or too less, It's fully balanced and I love it. It gives an idea about what the characters really are. So the blurb is good to go.
First Chapter: You know, this is what makes my expectations very high, like if I ever plan to go to a music festival, I'd want a guy to take me away and watch the sunset with me. Like why do you bring my hopes up? Everything that Jimin do was making me go AWWWWW like how the hell a guy can be so good and cute all at once. Honestly, if I was in Felicity's place I'd do the same (this refers to the prologue only ;-) )
Grammar: Everything was perfect though. All you need to do is read through it again and correct a few mistakes and clear the air at some point, it gets confusing in some scenes.
Plot: It is an overly used plot honestly but the fact that it didn't continue as the rest. The 10 years leap and the transformation of the characters as an adult is really remarkable. It was like they met at the festival then it turned out that they are attending the same university and then from there their relationship takes place. It's amazing different though. Like the way Felicity didn't just fall on his feet even after 10 years after he ghosted her. She is a really strong character though.
Overall Experience: Girl, just update your story as fast as you can I can't wait to read it further. The way you write is so easy to read like it isn't so complicated. Everything feels all simple and sweet types. I already love Tristan, even after knowing that something is up with those two he is still himself and considering to save money rather than seeing how uncomfortable Felicity was. I love him.
Note: First of all, did you made all the covers, banner, aesthetics, trailers all by yourself. DAMN GIRL LIKE WTF can you make me one, please. Everything is so eye-catchy the trailers and the aesthetic AMAZING...... And the characters are a total fusion of TVDU, Elite, I love it. I just hope that you continue writing this book as you have started and I rooting for this book to be popular one day. All The Best for everything 🍀
