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Cover: Your cover is beautiful and simplistic which I appreciate. Most of the colours that you used definitely leaned more towards the earth and cool tones. There were no warm tones which I find both good and bad at the same time. The reason I said both good and bad is because your theme over all isn't very "warm" but warm tones tends to balance everything out so it depends to who is actually seeing it.
Title: The title is *coughs and sings* amazinggggggg. No joke thought, the title is very attention grabbing. Like, usually "plot twists" is more of the situation not an actual breathing human being, so it's cool. And it's not that hard to remember too!
Description: The description is short, sweet and to the point which is great. I spent wayyy too many times reading long-description books. No, just no. I really like how you put relatable texts. RELATABLE TEXTS. Like HOW IN THE WORLD DID YOU GET THE IDEA?! Steals Idea. Acts Innocent. I really LOVE the fact that you put in the quotes from your book and give an actual description. I LOVE IT!!!
Grammar: Your Grammar is wonderful. It really is! The fact that you didn't just repeat the same exact words over and over pleases me. You search for other synonym, you construct proper sentences and you did NOT put wayyy too many details that makes me wanna sleep.
Writing Style: Your writing style is definitely more to the informal side (I mean, it's first-person, it tends to be) and I really like that. Not only that, the pace of your story is not overly slow either. But it's not super fast that makes me gape with surprise. It's smack in the middle where I can enjoy it while eating popcorn. Eats popcorn while doing this. Characters I really like the fact that you didn't put Vanessa as a shallow character. You actually put a vulnerable girl behind the tough façade. She's protecting herself by creating a disguise for herself which I think nowadays is such a relatable concept. Ian is definitely... surprising to say the least. Points subtly to Chapter 23. Yeah I meant that chapter. And the fact that he's already a boss of his own company? Bruh, can I take over? I aspire to be like that XD. But in all seriousness I like the way that you put Ian as that double-personality person, which I think is a problem a lot of people have.
Plot: The plot isn't very original, but the way you use it and create this masterpiece just blows my mind. No, not literally, if it is literally, I wouldn't be writing this right now. I like how you incorporate every day problems or challenges that society face these days. It gives your story more depth than just a normal Chicklit.
Overall Experience: I love it!!! I simply love it!!! I can relate to Vanessa the most I think, except for the fact that she's basically dripping in gold. I like the thought and the depth you put to your book! PS: I'm really sorry for the time it took for me to write this. Feel free to hate me after this but I hope you like it nonetheless.
