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Cover (3/10): The cover is very plain. It is not attractive at all. I liked the idea of using a phone and the cast members pictures in the banner but it is not synchronizing with each other. And the background is also not making sense at all. The font used to write the title is also not good too. The subtitle's/quote's font is same as the title according to me, which I think you should've used as different and more attractive fonts for writing both of them. Having different fonts on the cover can will make it look more attractive and try using more lively colours to make it come out.
Title (8/10): The title is cliché. Many people use it. It also gives away what will happen in the book, but then, it is upon the author on how he/she will enlighten it. It is suiting the book at the as well. Also, I suggest to put 'the' before stalker- The Stalker Girl. It would sound more appropriate.
Description (7/10): The description can be improved. The dialogues which you have added are good. It irks a mind of a reader. But then when it comes to the real description, I think more information should be added. Add things which will make it more unique. Like things they will be doing together. And there is no need to write it like this-
Character aesthetics by the awesome @AuroraWalker356 Cover by the very same amazing @AuroraWalkler356
You can simply write "Cover and Character Aesthetics made by the very amazing/awesome @AuroraWalker356". And there is no need to mention its genre too.
Grammar (10/10): Your grammar was on point! I found no mistakes at all. Punctuation marks, capitalisation, italics and bold was used correctly too.
Presentation (10/10): Your presentation is nice. I liked that you are using different banners at the end of the chapter. You are using title for naming the chapters really nice. It intrigues the mind of the reader what will happen in that particular chapter.
Writing Style (7/10): Your writing style is nice. The starting line was brilliant. You don't beat around the bush. You are stating then and there what all is required to be said. But you should maybe a little bit do that. It creates more suspense for the readers and keeping them entertained too. You can add more description about the place your protagonist is in. Leaving this, everything was good. Your humour was on point. I was laughing hard. Good Job!
Characters and Plot As the book is in its initial stages, I mean to say it has just introduced the characters and all, I don't really have much to say and give points to. So, I won't mark you in these fields. I hope you understand 😊. But I can say that the storyline is cliché. Many people write these types of stories. Now it is on you how you will represent it to your readers. And the characters, like Kate and her brother and best friend are funny as hell.
Overall (45/60) [till marked]: The book is cliché but funny. Right now, not much can be said as everything is being introduced to readers. But I can say it holds the potential to catch every reader's eye here on Wattpad. All the Best!!
