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Cover: The cover did not catch my interest in reading your book. The colours are bland, therefore making it unattractive. I only liked the fonts used for writing the title. I suggest you to change your cover and make it look more colourful and attractive. That way, it will draw in more readers. The saying 'Don't judge a book by it's cover' doesn't work all the time.
Title: The title completely suits the book. It's thoughtful and smart. One can derive love, heartbreak, yearning and sadness from it. Like a heart wrenching story of two lovers that will take you on a roller coaster of emotions. It's simply beautiful.
Description: Mysterious, Thrilling, and Exciting. There's a small information on both main characters as well as a hint of what's going to happen. Especially the last line
'Lost memories come to light for Hermione and a dark plot is uncovered'.
It sparks curiousity in a reader and makes a person wonder, 'What dark plot?' 'What could possibly happen?'. It is short and considerably detailed.
Grammar, Spelling and Punctuations: There's little to no mistakes in grammar construction and spelling as well. Puntuations are carefully arranged in a way that gives the desired effect of a sentence. However, there are parts were punctuation marks such as comma were ommited.
Plot: It is beautiful, well-planned, intriguing and full of suspence. There are unexpected tragic events, heartwarming dialogues, tear triggering moments, parts where you just want to strangle the antagonist and also very well incorporated themes such as love, the beauty of friendship, forgiveness, hatred, rage, fear and insecurities. These all rendered the characters imperfect and relatable. The plot is thick, seasoned with spoonfuls of humour, sprinckles of arguments that tug on the heartstrings and bucketloads of intense drama. You'll want to cry, laugh or roll on the floor dramatically. It's brilliant! Like watching Dramione actually happen on tv!
Originality: It's hard to say for Fanfiction since the characters and setting already exist but I can definitely say that with the help of various mixtures of emotions, vivid descriptions, perfect personality renditions and the idea of memory loss with the way it was portrayed all compensated.
Neatness: Paragraphing, Sentence structure, Capitalisation of nouns, intricate and beautiful writing style, detailed descriptions and use of a different font to show a character's thoughts are just marvellous. My sharp eyes could hardly detect one error.
Overall Experience: I absolutely enjoyed the book. It's amazing. Like riding a roller coaster that jumbles up your insides, this one tempers with your feelings. Frustration included because of Dramione's stubborness but that's just one of the things that makes the book interesting. I look forward to reading more of your works!
