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I am soooo happy!
Why?
BECAUSE I GOT 2 COMMENTTS!!!
yeah yeah most people have thousands but seriously it is the first commentts that I have ever gottennn even though both of them are from the same person!!
The persons' name is @funkymonkeys and they give really nice feedback to heaps of people!
So go ask her to read your story!!
So, here is Chapter 4.
Hope you enjoy it,and don't forget...
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Chapter 4:
Louis’ POV
“We have a few rules.” I told her, looking her in the eye.
She looked so freaked out and it was kinda funny.
I started laughing, and so did the other boys.
“Don’t worry Darcy! The rules are really stupid ones that Louis made up…” Harry said, putting his arm around her shoulders.
“They aren’t stupid!” I shouted.
Harry pouted, and walked off.
Ooops. I upset him again.
“Well, the rules are. 1. No touching my carrots in the fridge. 2. You only call superman if you need to. 3. No wearing stripes. Understood?” I said, looking at Darcy.
“Yes Louis…” she said, looking really frightened.
“Ahh don’t worry love I’m only joking!” I told her, and put my arm around her shoulder, she tensed at first, and then she relaxed.
“Sorry Darcy..” I told her, and she smiled.
“I knew you were just kidding Lou.” She said.
“Here! Have a carrot!” I said, handing one to her.
“Haha thanks Lou!” she said, she seemed like my type, loud and funny once you get to know her.
But I have Eleanor… who was basically perfect.
How could I say that I liked a girl who I haven’t even known for a day? But for some reason, she had some kind of aura about her.
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Darcy’s POV:
My dream had actually come true. I got a call from Simon telling me that this was big dream, this is what I have wanted to do, be a singer. He told me that he told that I was a really good singer, and I deserved this chance.
We have been chilling in their apartment for a while now, and it has been really nice. We got to know each other and I learnt things about them that you cant find on the internet. Their personalities match almost exactly like what the theories are.
Niall, loves food and is really kind and caring. He is actually a leprechaun. Jk.
Liam, is really responsible and is nice to have a chat with. When the boys do something wrong, he’d tell them off, and I did too.
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Sixth Member
ФанфикWe all remember in the 4th video diary that Louis Tomlinson had a dream that there was a new sixth member and he wanted them to go away but none of the boys were helping him. What happens when he realises that Simon has introduced a new GIRL member...
