This book has been in writing for a year at the time of writing this and has been changed from first person / present to third / past. At the time of writing I am learning new styles and ways of writing so it is possible it changes just a few minor times throughout.
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Inconclusive is a book of my own original idea. The work is mainly inspired by the book series, 'Divergent' by Veronica Roth. All subjects of 'The Divergent Series' belong to Veronica Roth strictly, I'm just simply taking them and using them to attempt to expand the boundary and limits of the idea I have.
Anything not in her books is created by me, or anything not in her books is inspired off of the film(s) or my own idea.
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Content Warning(s) to keep in mind consist of:
Harsh Language
Sexual Themes
Major Character Death
Description(s) of Blood / Gore
Smoking / Drug / Substance usage and or abuse
Underage Drinking
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Things you NEED to know to understand this;
Time has been altered, in this -- e.g., Four is 18 in the books when he and Tris meet, now he is 19.
Protagonist is three years older than Beatrice, they are related, and I did this only because of how much one person can change in just three years.
The concept of the world has been altered, I removed the whole genetic / DNA plot from the og books and rewrote it entirely. If you liked the DNA stuff, well sorry, alternative universe ;)
I mostly go off of book descriptions / personalities!
Eric isn't blonde, he's a light brunette like the book
Four isn't an ass, he's bold but still fun (around his friends)
AMAR IS THE BEST CHARACTER -- Wait I'm going off track, cough.
Final thing, I swear!
I never read Four: A collection. I never got the opportunity to read it nor get my hands on it, so the first half of the story is based on my ideas (filler but very amusing). It's also based on the wiki's and sites I've found that actually go over his story for book reports so it gave me a better idea on how to write, so dialogue is not exact it was just my prediction of it.
PART 1 IS SET 3 YEARS BEFORE DIVERGENT.
Part 2 is set in between F:aC and D.
Part 3 is set in Divergent.
This is Book one of possible two, it depends how much people like this and are willing to want me to write more. I do genuinely like this story. I've planned it up to Insurgent as my version of how I think it could / would go, but again it depends if people really like this.
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INCONCLUSIVE
/ˌɪnkənˈkluːsɪv/
adjective
not leading to a firm conclusion or result; not ending doubt or dispute
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DIVERGENT
/dʌɪˈvəːdʒ(ə)nt,dɪˈvəːdʒ(ə)nt/
adjective
tending to be different or develop in different directions
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❝ You're nothing special, you're nothing remotely close to normal. You're just a damn mistake and you'll be living with the Factionless when it's our turn to choose. ❞
The test seemed to say otherwise.
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(Kristian's story begins in Chicago, thousands of years after the great wars in a faction that goes by the name Abnegation.)
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Inconclusive | E.C
Hayran Kurgu❝ Faction before blood. What utter bullshit. ❞ - Kristian Prior was different, and not different in the cliché good kind of way. She was constantly reminded of the fate set for her, that she didn't fit in, that she'd be Factionless. She had accepted...
