Review- I just wanted to start of by saying that your story and plot is kind of cliche and unrealistic for me. Your writing style is awesome and you add a lot of detail to the feelings of your main character. One thing I noticed is that you don't add too much detail to the surroundings, instead you make a lot of dialogue. I just want to keep this critique short and overall your story is written very well. I hope you keep writing! If you have anymore questions just ask me!
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Rating: 6.4/10
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