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Between Worlds - A story by @_SkylarRose_

Review-

I found your first 4 paragraphs sort of cliche. I have read many books that start with someone waking up to their alams in the morning and end up being late. You need to think of a more creative start to your chapter. You described that scene really well though I found it kind of boring.

I read your prologue by the way, I really liked it! I just wanted to get it out there.

There isn't much to critique. Your spelling's fine and so is your grammar. I like the way you describe the scenes really well.

I like your plot, it's kind of unique compared to other teen fiction books I read.

I really liked your first chapter though I found it rather short. Most chapters I read are at least 3-5 pages long. Yours is only one page. It was kind of cut short though you ended the chapter pretty well. Here is your rating:

Rating: 8.7 / 10

I like your writing style and I hope you keep writing! Good luck!