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Heroes of Olympus and The Gaess of Zero - A story by @_xxzeusie

Review-

I love Heroes of Olympus! You described your characters extremely well and they act like the real books!

I saw a few spelling mistakes at the start, nothing a good editor can't fix.

You described their surroundings really well and I haven't got much to critique about your story. I really loved the way you created suspense! But you could've made your chapter longer.

I think I got a little bored at the start and I really didn't want to read on to the next chapter. I think you need to work on your endings a little bit more.

Here is your rating!

Rating: 8.9 / 10

Overall this story was really good! You portrayed the characters really well and I hope you keep writing! Good luck!