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Delicate Wings - A story by @DanceWithDeath

Review-

Hi! I just wanted to say great start! You got me captivated from the whole beginning! Your prologue was amazing! I just noticed you used 'and' a lot. Maybe in the prologue you could add more description about the surroundings. I also think you should get/hire an editor because I spotted a few mistakes; minor, but I think you should get someone to look at it.

Your plot is very intriguing and promising. It is very original and I love it! I am just saying you should definitely continue on this plot. Here is your rating:

Rating: 9.2/10

Your story is very good and you should share it to the world! Good luck!