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Hoping for Hannah - a story by @Sonia_Henry

Review-

To start off, I like your plot. Although I find it quite un-original. I have read many books with the same plot as you. But, you wrote it very well. You described each scene with lots of description but sometimes too much. You just need to work on levelling it out a little, leave a little bit of suspense. But that's just my opinion.

I think you write your sentences too long. Sometimes you miss some commas and some other minor stuff that any qualified editor can fix.

I like your writing style and I think you should keep going. Just remember to check over your grammar to make it perfect. I think if you add a little bit more of suspense, it will spectacualr!

Here is your rating.

Rating: 7.6 / 10

Just keep working on it. Remember, this is just my opinion. Everyobody has different opinions. I liked the start of the chapter though. Good luck and I hope my critique helped you!