Progenies

a question

Should i rewrite this?

There are certain aspects that i believe could have been executed far better, and just have been written better in general. certain bits felt rushed and i forgot about some things (what happened to Y/N's injury for example :"). so, if anyone is out there what do you think? if i don't get a response by late july then i think i'll just rewrite it.

*also if i do i will try to be more consistent with my updates.