Yn is a cold hearted girl, merciless and a mafia with mysterious past. No one knows her much. She is the only daughter of her mother. After her dad was killed By her enemy, her mother started dating.
Will yn accept her bf as her dad?
Will bts and b...
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This reader said that my story is confusing and yn is pathetic. I am now asking you all Was it like this?? Is yn pathetic? Was this story confusing? Pls guys answer honestly! I will not say anything to anybody but pls answer me honestly. My stories are that bad?? I have always listened to you. Once a reader corrected me and I followed that reader's advice in next chapter. So you all can tell me whats wrong with my story??
