Bulletproof

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Alrighty, so I already came up with the idea of the new story, I want it to be called Bulletproof and it's based off a line from the Song Bulletproof Love by Pierce the Veil, the song should be attached above, or to the side, I'm not sure if it works though😕

If you haven't already realized I'm into more metalcore or post-hardcore bands like Pierce the Veil, Bring Me The Horizon, Of Mice & Men and so on...

The line from the song goes "My love for you was bulletproof but you're the one who shot me"

This is like my all time favorite line from this song, and like my second favorite from the Selfish Machines album, so I think it'll be easy for me to make a book on it.

The story will be a Carter Mahone story, and will contain a lot of swearing, sexual content, violence, drug use, etc.

I think it'll be a really good story. But I don't want to post it and have people not read it, I've done a few punk sorties on an old account I had, but deleted the account for personal reasons, I would love of you all would read it, the prologue that I'll probably use is below, it's short for a reason:

"What do you mean you're sorry?!" I scream "It's too late for you to be sorry" I shove him against the wall.

"It can't be too late, please, you've got to believe me"

"Believe you?! I saw it with my own eyes! Actions speak louder than words Carter, and your action scream this was all a mistake" I spit, my eyes filling with tears.

"Baby please, this can't be a mistake, I love you" He begs, looking utterly pathetic.

"If you truly loved me, you would've never done this, I know I shouldn't have trusted you"

"I do love you, I swear, I need you please don't leave me" He gets on his knees, pleading. But I turn away and walk to the door, he screams for me to come back, but o have no desire to continue this, I turn around one last time, and express our whole relationship in one sentence.

"I thought we were bulletproof, but you always had the gun and I sat patiently, hoping and praying that you'd never pull the trigger, but you did, you shot me, you shot us and now it's over" I walk out of his house, and out of his life, we were toxic anyways, this is best for the both of us.

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What do you think?

I think it'll be really cool, but not because I wrote it 😂

I have a lot for this planned, and I started writing a few of the chapters a while ago, but I want to finish it, and transfer it from paper to wattpad.

Let me know what you guys think 😊

Btw, I won't update this weekend because my friend that I haven't seen in like 3 years is coming over and I want to spend a lot of time with her😄

I love you guys

Cailin

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