These are scenes I either didn't plan, toke out or change
1) I actually didn't plan on Dan and Phil getting married, I actually planned on Dan committing Suicide but decided against it
2) Dan's dad wasn't supposed to die in this, but I was trying to incorporate him in later chapters
3) Peej and Chris were supposed to be some of their best friends, but I thought that was to claque so I decided to just make them teachers
4) Ian, Anthony, Felix, Cry, Nathan, and Destery werent supposed to be in this, they were supposed to be just minor protagonists
5) I was actually going to name Dan and Phil's child Izzy, but I thought Lily fit better
6) I was going to have Felix and Cry get married instead of Dan and Phil
7) Cry never was going to reveal his face
8) I was going to actually have a scene where Phils mum kills either Echo or Lee because they are so important in Dan and Phil's lives
9) Adrian was going to be in this, but I thought it fit better if he was dead
10) Victoria Howell was originally going to die in the car crash with Adrian ((As I already knew how Adrian was going to die)) But suicide had to be included somewhere in here
11) Fact: Echo doesn't have any parents or siblings left, but at first I was going to incorporate a family down the line
12) Dan and Phil weren't even supposed to be together, just friends that save each other's lives
13) I was going to have Anthony and Ian split up
14) I wanted in incorporate my friend Piggiezonfire but I forgot about it, sorry bear
15) I was going to have it so Phil was straight
16) Dan was going to fall in love with a guy named Lunar
17) Phil was originally going to be a jock
18) Felix was originally with Marzia
19) I was going to In Force MCR in this
20) Mark and Sean (Jack) were supposed to be in this story
That's not everything I changed but enough to show you guys how much I edited this story and how it could have turned out differently, mkay bai
~Brokenblades
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Take the monsters away | Phan (Completed)
FanfictionDan howell is starting at a new school, he is abused and raped by his own father, Phil lester is the so called emo fag, people call him that because someone told everyone he's gay, so he gets brutally beaten everyday but pretends as if nothing happe...
