REALLY WATTPAD? REALLY?

*Chapter 17: Making up Because They Have to Live Under the Same Roof.

Characters getting back together because for some weird reason they are forced to live together.

The example below goes for both what I notice in teen-fiction and fanfiction. The only reason that it's told in a fanfic POV is because at the time I wrote this I was only a fanfic reader. You may notice this type of stuff more in fanfic than teenfic tho.

Throughout the example, I will be making commentary authors notes which will have a devided by the  📝 emoji.

Example:

Applia-IPhone5s's POV:

hi my nayms Applia-IPhone5s but u can jus call meh APoleey! mah parents r on a 5 month biznis trip nd me nd harreh havnt ben getin along very well. i wuz wakin down 2 da kichin n make a cayk dat wuz not 2 be eated till 2nite

suddenlee i gru a big mauth "DA COULDABDJEKCEJBEEEP!" JK

DEN I HERD DA DOR CREEK DOWNSTERES MEENIN HARREH HAD GOTTED up!

den i herd footstepz to da kichin n den i herd "OPAH GANG NOM NOM STYLES! NOM NOM NOM NOM NO9M NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM NOM"" JK I just herd regyular chooing

i wen downsters to da kichen 2 see a harreh with a beaver mouth n purpole orbz JK AGAIN den he saw me and smiled lookin lyke a chipmuonk cauz hiz mauth be full of Cheetoz! wait thooz aint Cheetoz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! that's-

"HEY BA-AAAAAAAAAAAYB" Harreh said, dayum he be soundin lyke Cookie Monster wit dat raspy voyce nd his mauth full uv.. *SPLAT* Harreh accidently spit on meh. i smelld chocoliyt cayk with harrehs spit on it which be smellin lyke tunips.

"HARREH U WERNT EVEN SUPOST 2 EET DA CAYK!"

"sorry" he replied frowning "your cake is just s-so g-good" he said

"its ok Harreiuah"

*2 hours later*

I wuz sitttin on da SNIBITEHWAHPAHWOOHPAH couch when i herd harreh comin down da sters den i herd

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