Black Vow ~ Fanfiction

Miku ~13

I was sitting on the edge of the fountain as usual waiting for Rin to come. I was early as always since the only positive thing I had in my life was Rin. She was such a happy girl and I was very fond of her. Though sometimes I wanted more than just friendship from her... I shook my head to clear it not allowing those thoughts to take root in my mind. I stood up and smiled seeing a blonde head coming into the park and was about to call out when I realized it wasn't Rin. 

Instead it was a man.

The man had such a pained and mournful exspression that would only be completed if there was rain. He looked a lot like Rin to, almost like a brother. He had the same blonde hair and the same blue eyes, but his weren't clear as the sky but more deep and dark like the ocean. 

My heart had stopped.

This mans pained eyes met mine and he froze as well, scanning me from across the park. We both just stood there in silence gazing at each other. I had met many men in my time many very attractive men, men more attractive and sexy than this man before me. But he had something different about him, he was special. 

Caustiously I walked around the fountain towards him and he to came closer to me mesmerized. We closed the distance until we were no more than a foot away from each other and we looked at each others faces, each others eyes, noses, lips, cheek bones, everything. I didn't know this mans name or even the sound of his voice but I knew, I knew I was in love with him.

"I'm Len." The man spoke with a somewhat deep voice. The voice sounded vaugely familar though I couldn't pinpoint where from, it was as if I had heard him talking but in a distance so that only the wind gave me access to the sound of his gentle voice before now. "What is your name?"

"Miku." I said in a very quiet whisper. We stayed silent for a bit just watching each other as my feelings grew and grew, I was suppose to be meeting Rin and instead I was here falling in love with her twin. Did I love Rin...?

I must have frowned at the thought because Len reached out and gently touched me cheek his fce showing worry, "Are you ok Miku?"

The sound of his voice was so amazing so gentle so rich that I wanted to just listen to him speak for ever soaking and memorising the sound. But I was already drowning happily in his eyes. I reached up holding his warm hand to my face sad that I was wearing gloves so that I could not feel his skin. I held his hand there looking into his eyes before he pulled away turning to face away from me.

"I have been wandering around for a long time, years. I have wandered looking, searching, but never finding." He stepped one foot back towards me and turned his head so that he could look at me. He stretched out a hand palm up towards me, "Come with me Miku. Stay with me. Stay with me forever."

I hesitated. I wanted to be with Len. I loved him so of course I would go with him. Never even crossed my mind that I had just met him a few minutes ago let alone that I didn't know anything about him other than his name. But that hesititation was only momentary because the corners of my lips drew up slightly as I reached out and took his hand.

He relaxed glad that I was agreeing to go with him wherever that was and he pulled me to him wrapping his arms around the small of my back so that there was no space between us. He leaned down pausing an inch from my lips before closing that distance to.

I wish words could describe that kiss.

So guys I'm really in need of feedback... I know that I've got some readers and thank you so much for taking time out of your day to read my fanfiction. ^_^ But I would love some feedback so that I can make this story better! The original idea is based off of Vocaloids song like I said but really this is all me and I want to know what you guys think... So yeah please please PLEASE comment below and tell me what you think of my story so far, whether you love it or hate it tell me why. I wont judge I promise! Thanks!