Black Vow ~ Fanfiction

Miku ~19

He was perfect. Len, that is. I was sitting here now drooling over him while he watched the door waiting for Rin and Kaito. He was all dressed up in a brown jacket and a tie and his golden blonde hair was pulled back into a ponytail at the nape of his neck and his slender fingers were long and I couldn't stop imagining them just....ahhhh it was to much. He was to.... just to. Yeah just to. There is no word or sequence of words to describe this being here known as Len, I don't even think he was born human. 

It was then that an almost equally perfect creature walked in the room escorted by one that seemed evil yet attracting. My eyes widened as I recognized Rin in that white dress that glowed making her seem like an angel, all she would need were wings. She was wearing makeup, but it was done by someone that knew masteries of it since without anyone seeing Rin as much as I had they would have thought she just had perfect porclean skin, long dark lashes making her blue as sky eyes shine and sparkle, and her cheeks a perfect rose. The only thing in the way of utter perfection was the fact she wasn't smiling, well not the smile I knew anyways. This smile was clearly forced and it made me sad that she didn't want to be here. As soon as I calmed down enough to accept this goddess as Rin I looked at the man beside her.

It took me equally as long to recognize the man beside her in his unbuttoned black jacket with blue shirt underneath and black tie laying flat overtop. He looked tall and even though it seemed he wasn't wearing makeup it almost was like he was because the smile I had seen on him before was polite and this one made him seem evil and demonic. They were the perfect pair, obviously in love, the angel and the demon. Wow that's great I'm going to use that.

I hadn't realized I had gotten out of my chair and taken a step towards the two until I Felt Len's hand on my waist and he whispered furiously into my ear, "Who is he?" I didn't understand why he seemed so shocked, sad, and angry but I answered him happily, "Rin's date!"

With that I broke free of his arm and smiling happily took his hand instead pulling him closer to the two. "Rin you look amazing! I have never seen you so dressed up and beautiful." 

"Why thank you..." Rin said a blush growing on her face. She was trying to hide it though... I wonder why?

"This handsome man is Len." I said squeezing his hand and looking at him. He looked back at me and smiled making a rush go through me. Turning back to Rin her forced smile was back and pain seemed to be hidden deep in her eyes. 

"I'm Kaito." The blue haired demonic looking male said introducing himself. He held his hand out to Ren who hesitated before shaking it. I could almost swear that he mumbled "Demon" under his breath but I must have imagined it. 

"Let us eat!" I said happily circling the table that had been set for four. We were in a very high class restaurant and the meal for that evening had been preordered by yours truly. I sat down in the tall velvet chair that Len pulled out for me and waited for everyone else to be seated before I whistled loudly. Within moments seven waiters came out all with trays of food that they piled on our plates in small even portions before placing the excess on a side table where they stood waiting for any command from us. I looked down at the food and smiled happily picking up my fork and taking a bite of mashed potatoes loving the fluffiness of it. I then took a couple of green beans into my mouth loving the soothing almost crunchy feel in between my teeth. 

I was preparing myself for a bite of the bread when I noticed I was the only one eating. Len was staring down Kaito who was whispering softly to Rin who was looking like she was holding back tears and her shoulder muscles were strained. 

"Is everything alright?" I asked my fork still in my hand poised over my plate. 

Merry Christmas Inokori ^-^ haha

How do you guys feel about Miku's personality? I tried to make her seem very all up in herself but yet random and a light. Did it work? is it good? It's not the first time I've done a chapter with Miku and I'll be doing a chapter of Kaito towards the end but I want feedback of Miku first. Please and thank you!