Midori was a girl who is seen as an abomination by a tribe of hunters who ordered for her execution, however a member of the tribe learned the truth of her conception or in her case creation. Genetically made in a lab using different stolen DNA from...
(This is a little experiment I'm doing for this bookif it goes well I will do it for other books. The point here is to not only get your opinion on the characters I created for this story but to also do a simple recap on said characters and to develop and reveal some aspects of their life and personality so I don't have to use an entire chapters as exposition. I would appreciate it if you all comment on each character to let me know what your opinion is on them as well as what you expect from them. This will help me get ideas on which direction to take with the characters as the continues. I already know where they will be at the end of the story but the path that leads to it is a bit "open".)
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Character: F/N L/N
Age: 18
Weapon: (pretty much the burial blade from bloodborne with a few differences.)
Semblance: Unknown (Yeah he has yet to use his semblance still.)
Spirit: Pale Rider/ Death
Bio: Born into a tribe that still none of his friends know much about. He cares deeply for his daughter Midori and anyone she sees as a friend, sister, or mother. Anyone that treats Midori with kindness he acts friendly towards them. He shows no mercy to those who harm her or cause her distress. Before he met Midori he was originally void of most emotions and only showed a caring nature to his family after he met Midori he became more open to being attached to others. He has a positive relationship with his family and is the only one who can control his youngest sister. He not only is proficient with his weapon but with the weapons of his siblings as well. His main goal in life is to give his daughter the happiness she desires which to his dismay involves polygamy though he is getting used to the idea as time goes on. He only wears his combat attire when he expects to enter combat other than that he wears normal clothes.
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Character: Amber L/N
Weapon: Sword
Age: 17
Semblance: Rifts, She is able to tear the fabric of space and create numerous rifts that she has complete control over.
