EXO|D.O|Criticised Work

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-3rd Person POV-

You and Kyung Soo had art together. You enjoyed art so much and were really good but recently you've been feeling ill so you tried spending your time resting. Well Kyung Soo made you rest, so you couldn't put 100% effort into that project maybe 80% this time.

Either way Kyung Soo loved it and made his similar to yours but only yours was better. You and Kyung Soo sat on the middle table. While the teacher was calling all the students up to look at there sketchbooks so he could give feed back on their previous project and look through there sketchbook.

For the whole lesson you and Kyung Soo watched people come up and looked at what they had produced. They were all amazing and listened to everyone get positive feedback about there work and no negative.

"Y/N" the teacher said and you grabbed your sketchbook and walked to the other side of the table and sat down next to the teacher.

Kyung Soo watched as your teacher said everything in your sketchbook was lovely, until he got the last project.

"So this is what you have produced?" He asked almost shocked and you nodded.

"Can you tell me what's wrong with it and the parts you don't like?" He asked annoyed and you nodded slowly.

You pointed out the parts that you didn't like in your project and your teacher seemed bored. Once you finished he sighed.

"This isn't good Y/N. You could have put in more effort. You don't need all this imformation, you didn't do well on your drawing, the background is a terrible colour, you could have done the font more better and bolder, you could have used water colour to make it look like you put a lot of effort in, your story for the scenes is alright but you have a typo there" he kept on going criticising your work.

You looked down at you knees feeling disappointed in yourself. You wished that you could have put in 100% in it if you weren't ill and had other subjects you need to do work for. Your teacher went on for another five minutes and you felt tears forming in the corner of your eyes.

Kyung Soo had enough of listening criticising your work. He stood up from the table and walked over to you. He back hugged you and whispered in your ear not to listen and things like that.

"No lovey stuff in my classroom you two. You both can talk in the computer room or outside. I need to mark whatever this is" your teacher said while Kyung Soo brought you outside.

"Y/N don't listen to him. Your art work is amazing and the best I've scene out of the others. He just wants to see how you'd react if you got dissed I'm sure of it. Don't cry okay? I love you so much and it breaks my heart seeing you upset, hurt and sad" Kyung Soo pulled you into a tight hugged and kissed your forehead.

"Thank you Kyung Soo, I love you so much too" you smiled enjoying the hug he was giving you before you both went back into that classroom.

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First Uploaded: 29/10/2018
Edited: 16/01/2019

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