So, I went back and did some major name editing/switching for the football players to make it consitent with the plot and more cohesive. Please read fully because I edited names in mostly all the Levi chapters (but already edited them, so anyone who starts reading or you can go back now and see for yourself)
Here is a summary of the characters
Key:
Important characters
Bold-changes
Characters
Major editions to plot
(Don't follow the key too closely, I kinda improvised)
Edits in Chapter 5. Back Pack tagging:
We meet Zeek and BLAKE (changed from Mikey_.
-Zeek (not important and no changes) is the class clown who steals Levi's backpack.
Mikey''s name changed to Blake (I met someone named Mikey irl and I don't like using names similar to people I know irl) -Blake cheers on Levi and Levi explains that Blake is part of two people who are semi-nice to him
Edits in Chapter 11: Sight of Bones
-James arrogant along with being second in command to the team. (we later find in chapter 19 that they were kinda close the previous year.) James has a girlfriend named Jayla who is equally cruel. James immediatly calls Emery a loner when Levi asks.
-Kyler (kinda importan-ish) Kyler was originally the main person in chapter 17 but I switched it to Blake. So ya, he now doesn't really appear much
Edcits in Chapter 13: I slept with her
Origninally the player who threatened Levi was Kyler,...BUT CHANGED IT TO BLAKE
In this chapter Blake fights with Levi. Blake's girfriend, Dina, accused Levi of hooking up with her. Blake and Dina have a strong connection and honestly love eachother (something rare for highschool)
Edits in Chapter 15: Effed up
In the last paragraph I changed it from Keeyon to James who says ""What a goody-two-shoes."
Edits in Chapter 17: Screwing up and Screwing around
Switched, once more Keeyon to James
-So James is the one who gets mad at Levi and claims Levi isn't "who he was last year"
-Then there is Alex who isn't that big of a character (EDIT MARCH 8th!!! PRETTY IMPORTANT CHARACTER AND WILL BE THE M.C OF THE SEQUEL), but he's the nice one who tries to tell James to back off
Chapter 20: (coming out tomorrow morning)
Clarify:
James' girlfriend ---> Jayla (both of them mean and cruel to Levi and others)
Blake's girlfriend ---> Dina (who may be gossipy but has a good concoiuous and is essentually an okay person)
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The Lies We Told On Thursday Nights
Teen Fiction"She wasn't supposed to be here. She wasn't supposed to see my name on the list of effed up teens. She was not supposed to see my faults. And she, nor anyone else in my life, was supposed to know my story." ~~~ "I never thought he would be there. Si...
