Dear everyone,
I've been re-reading the book and realized that the narrator (most Levi's) is very very triggering and talks about suicide too often and casually.
I think I've been using suicide metaphors in Levi's POV too much and that is hard for some of you and me included. While suicide is often in Levi's mind, I don't think it is beneficial for anyone.
I also am worried I will get in trouble with Wattpad for violating their rules to large extent.
I am still going to keep Levi's thought process authentic and true, but I'm worried the way I'm writing his POV is too suggestive. That being said, I will still keep the suicide theme in his mind, but wane the more triggering lines.
Before I go back and slightly edit the book (not much though) I want to hear what you guys think?
If it triggers you (be honest)? Or if you think it is appropriate and adds to the book? Is it fine as it is? Are you only reading it for that triggering factor?Is it too much and too grotesque?
Please respond and let me know before I change things.
You can comment on this chapter, or DM (but DM's don't work will for me, I only get alerts on my laptop, not my phone(and typically its several hours later))
Thank you everyone!
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The Lies We Told On Thursday Nights
Teen Fiction"She wasn't supposed to be here. She wasn't supposed to see my name on the list of effed up teens. She was not supposed to see my faults. And she, nor anyone else in my life, was supposed to know my story." ~~~ "I never thought he would be there. Si...
