A/N : Important note at the bottom, readers - please be sure to check it out!x Also, I don't suggest reading this if you're under 13? It doesn't get sexual, and nor is there swearing, but it uh.... gets a bit graphic at certain points?? However, if you're gonna ignore that suggestion or are actually relatively of age, do take some holy water on your way in-
Mark
Slow, sensual, passionate. Kissing Mark would be an experience that satiates all senses. Being the oldest, he'd likely be rather experienced in this field, with an impeccable instinct of when to be delicate, and when to ramp things up. To make a metaphor out of this, you'd be an orchestra being conducted by him, every minute change resulting in a new side uncovered. It could possibly lead to more, although not always. He'd try his best to gauge what it is that you want from your kisses and responses, tailoring his own actions to make sure you're the happiest you can be.
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Jaebum
Jaebum would most likely be a rougher kisser, though I can't imagine he's aggressive. As in, I can see him slamming someone into a wall, but he'd make sure his arm is surrounding you so it absorbs any pain or impact instead of your body. Do you kinda see what I mean? He'd be so infinitely careful while doing seemingly careless things and try his absolute best to make this a passionate, whilwind-esque make out session for you. He'd be assertive and dominant, taking charge and directing how things go, but never once doing anything to make you uncomfortable.
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Jinyoung
Jinyoung would be (and I know this is a controversial thing to be saying so please take a deep breath) a switch. He'd be happy to take the lead in your make out sessions and controlling the pace, but damn were you hot when you were dominant. He has a lazy side to him that doesn't manifest to much, but if you're sinning (or coming close to it), what difference does it make, going the extra mile? He'd be very generous with letting you flip the two of you around or elevate things by doing something a bit risqué.
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Jackson
Jackson would be a firecracker of a kisser. Hand would be everywhere, all the time. He'd kiss with immense desperation and feeling, making him seem so unbelievably passionate. He'd ride the line between delicate and rough beautifully, straying briefly to either side occasionally just to get the symphony of sounds out of you that he lived to hear. He'd prefer to be the one taking the lead, though as long as you were as fast paced and desperate as he was, anything would work for him.
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Youngjae
If you think 'Top Youngjae' isn't a thing, think again. Yes, he'd normally be mellow and delicate and giggly and sweet, but when push came to shove and you caught him in a specific mood, this angel here would shed his halo for a pair of horns in a second. I'm talking biting lower lips, crashing of teeth, bruises on hips kind of roughhousing. If he really wanted you like that, then there would be an almost hundred percent chance that the making out would escalate to something else entirely, a whole new ball game.
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Bambam
Bambam would be the most chill out of all the members. Maybe its on account of his youth, but something about him just reads as playful. Yes, he's literally sex walking on two legs, but that being said, he's absolutely the type of guy who'd prefer slow, languid kissing that the both of you could go at for hours over a wild session. He'd rather knot his hands in your hair and tug delicately every so often to pull a small whine from you rather than throw you on a couch and just go at it wildly. It would be slow, calm, temperate, and chill. If anything escalates, it would probably result in an equally lazy, calm time.
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Yugyeom
Giggles. He'd be adorable even as he leaves marks all over your neck, adorable as he whispers the most inappropriate of things in your ear. Things could get really steamy with him really fast - the two of you could be watching a boring movie one moment, and then be going at it the next. With him, its this almost impossible combination of innocent and, for lack of better word, kinky. Two opposite concepts, and yet he somehow perfectly encapsulates both.
A/N : Hey lovelies! How have you been? Long time no see, but I'm glad I've gotten to publish a little something:)
My question to you is this - what am I doing wrong?
That might be confusing to look at, but I ask you, someone who isn't me and can take an objective lens to my work, what the weaknesses are. There's shortcomings to every writer's work, even if it is their magnum opus. I like to think I haven't written mine yet, but I am, more or less, happy with this book. I want to know how YOU can be happy too. I want to know how and where I can improve. Please do let me know.
