The end of utopia (being re written)

The day they lost their sun

(There's a song above)
Let's go back to the time the generals were young and innocent they season was spring and they had been together all year along with aki's younger sister by 4 years meaning she was only 7 years old but she lit up their worlds she was their sun with each other they made up the sky that always protected her that beautiful azure sky....
It was a normal day like any other they finished school and went to aki's house no mansion to see amateratsu or amate. When they got there she ran to her brother with all her might and yelled " welcome back onii-chan!" While take king him down the others laughed or smiled at the scene amate proceeded to get up and yell " hey kawa,kana,kuro,naka,and saru onee and onii-chans!" They all chuckled "hello amate." They headed in to aki's room which was at least a classroom size that would fit 50 kids at least. "Onii-chan I found a room that was locked can we go explore it?" Amate said all of them were wondering the same thing 'a locked room? I thought we've been everywhere?' "Sure show us where it is" aki replied
Amate headed through many corridors and twist and turns until they finally got there it was a normal lock and they broke it very quickly. Amate ran in very quickly "wait up it could be dangerous!" Aki yelled out since he had never been to this part of the house he didn't know what was inside it was locked for a reason after all. " it's fine! hey look at this I found a box!" Amate exclaimed happily as she brought it to them they weren't sure if they should open it or not kawa being very curious just opened it and when she did they heard a beautiful melody. 'So it was a music box they all thought' then when the music stopped there a bright white light and they were sucked into the box. Inside it was space full of bright stars shinning at them then a woman appeared. She floated around them studying them as if they were the strangest things she's ever seen " who are you I haven't seen anyone or anything in years!?" She asked they talked for quite a bit and then they told her their names and the woman said " my name is tsuki,I want to give you something as thanks for visiting me." " sure" they said skeptically she said some mantras and then it went black when they awoke they were still in that realm. She spoke of the gift she gave them "it is called a 『skill』 or 『stigma』you are usually born with it if you are a special being but I shall give it to you as thanks." She started to explain each of their abilities and explained that some may view it as a curse or the power to use them as a weapon so keep it secret she told them. With that they were sent back. They all heeded her words except for amate who wanted to show her powers to her mom and dad making sure to leave the others out of it though for some reason,then the PF came to take her away they were powerless to save her even with their powers if they were caught who would save her? Amate didn't fight back no matter how many times they yelled for her she didn't turn back. When the doors to the car started to close she turned around with tears and a smile on her face she mouthed "I love you" to all of them. At that point they thought if they had never met tsuki then they might've continued their days happily with amate with
them. they have matured since that time though if they hadn't had this power than they would never be able to save amate but she was still the cause of her disappearance. If they had left their homes that day they might've seen the beautiful azure sky welcoming the akatsuki (new dawn) that day.
That is the story of that day. now let's go back to the present.
(Moment of silence for the AWOL amate)
~Melody
P.S to those who do not like drama fluff romance the next three chaps have a ton of it but there are important details so you do have to read it