The end of utopia (being re written)

Everything comes crashing down

Back to kawa's house:
"Ngh.." kawa mumbled as she started to wake up it was about 1:37 in the morning she looked around and saw aki sleeping on a chair with his head down on her bed looking very cute and innocent. when she reached out to pet his head he started to stir but was still asleep. She petted his head gently while singing a lullaby (above though if your against gay couples only listen to the music) to lull him to a dreamless sleep once again. she wondered why he was still here and saw the medicinal tea on the her bedside and since she knew her parents were out on a business trip she knew that meant aki had to make it himself she smiled at the thought. she decided to check her house to make sure nothing burned. luckily for her nothing was burned but the kitchen was a mess like a stigma rampaged with their powers. she knew it would take all night to clean it up and since she was feeling better and couldn't seem to sleep again she decided to pass the time by cleaning. half way through cleaning at around 4 am the fever came back full force making her light headed and dizzy and she fainted into unconsciousness once again.
3 hours later:
Aki woke up to an empty bed and a blanket on him. 'must be awake...' he thought as he got up he decided to go look for her. 'Maybe she saw the kitchen and is cleaning it? Wait no she might be pissed but she wouldn't get mad from just that would she.......?' He decided to be a man and head there anyways and thank god he did because when he saw her she was a deathly pale and very cold though she was still breathing she was just barely able to it and was nearly dead.he was shocked maybe it was he felt he was at fault for not being alert enough maybe it was because he should have kept a better eye on her but one thing he did know was he would not get to their base in time so he would have to go to the nearest hospital (which does indeed have technological things to an extent they do not have cars nor the MIR readers) which was 5 blocks north. He wrapped her in a warm blanket and ran for the hospital if they did not save her he would have to make way to their base 5 miles off into the east which would usually take them an hour but with her... It would take at least 2.5 hrs. When he got there they did indeed accept him but said they could only do so much and she was now in the ICU or intensive care unit.when aki heard the news he was in shock and felt it was his fault for not taking care of her well enough even though she was sick very badly at that,and worst of all what would he tell the others? Especially if she died who would take care of their tea and planning being their secretary as well as helping them even though she herself was busy? Who would take that place? The answer no one maybe they took her for granted far too much,maybe they should have cared more maybe if they did that this would not have happened and she would not be sick.....
Scene change back to the base:
Koi came back in the morning severely wounded from the shot to his leg he managed to stop the flow of blood from bleeding too much but he could only do so much when he entered through the front doors he proceeded to faint immediately. They rushed him to the surgery room to remove the bullet and stitch up the shot. To even the medics who had never seen a wound as bad as this inflicted upon one of the members of the azure sky they worked through it all no matter how bloody it was some of the new surgeons that were not veterans though had thrown up from the amount of blood. 3 hours later they came out they announced it successful which made them all cheer in happiness that one of their brethren was all right.....
At the hospital:
.......kawa was not fairing as well though. They said they were only able to keep her alive in a comatose and it was up to her to wake up. Aki was heart broken at this seeing as he was to take care of her what would he tell the others what of her parents what was he going to say 'oh yea your daughters in a comatose because of me sorry.' No but the first thing he did was phone the other generals in a private place. "Yo what's up?" Saru was the first to pick up "hey." kana was the second to pick up her sky"omg for you to call again me such an honor *fake tears*." Kuro was the third "hey what do tou want?" Naka was the last to pick up when all were assembled "I have bad news...."aki said as he began to trail off "how bad is it.....?" Kana asked "really bad." That put fear into the generals minds what happened that was really bad? Kawa was asleep in a feverous state and was why she was not here they knew that or so they thought..... Aki took a deep breath and built his courage "kawa's....in a comatose." He said dead serious "Whattttt she was fine yesterday day just with a slight fever what happened aki explain!" They all yelled at least one form of it "when I woke up this morning she wasn't in her bad and I went to look for her but she was ...... Passed out in the kitchen deathly pale,cold,barely breathing and barely alive." They listened solomely they all turned off their skies maybe to get some privacy to cry somewhere. But aki had one more pair to tell and that was her parents and when they found out her mother fainted and her father was in denial heartbroken that happened to their daughter.
That night though one may have heard five small voices at different spots singing the same song (above) that kawa sang for them when they couldn't sleep sometimes just like a mother or older sister now granted some of them couldn't do it as well as her and were crying while singing it if you heard it all at once it would have sounded.....beautiful and on the next morning the most azure of skies returned once again to welcoming once again another akatsuki.
Tbc
(When shall kawa wake up or the better question is will she wake up... 0.o? Is the azure sky another foretelling? Read the next chapter to find out)
~Melody