The Three Hinata's

Chapter 11

'I have the lyrics and the composition, let's see how they are together' Ryuko thought as she put her glasses on and sat in front of her keyboard. She started playing the melody to the song as she sang the lyrics

I start to think of what I'd do
I start to think of what I'd become
When the sun passed on by, and so
There's no better day than today

Today I'm gonna make my mark
Today you all will see all that I can give
I may be young but I have the strength to carry on
I know I will be your star

This journey is long but it's a road worth taking
I may be alone on the stage but your eyes are always with me
I can't believe this feeling is something I can call my own
I can't believe that I am here in front of you

Today I'm gonna make my mark
Today you all will see all that I can give
I may be young but I have the strength to carry on
I know I will be your star

I look forward to what tomorrow brings
I will let you see all that I have to give
There's a fire in my blood that can't be put out
While the stars above shine onto me

Today I'm gonna make my mark
Today you all will see all that I can give
I may be young but I have the strength to carry on
I know I will be your star

'The introduction is chancey, but the melody increases in tempo by the chorus and remains throughout the song. The bass and percussion are more prominent a the beginning and the treble comes in between the chorus and second verse. The melody is unusually upbeat for what I normally do, but this is primarily a pop song. By introducing rock elements I took another chance, but this is something he has never done before. I just hope that it's him' Ryuko thought as she overlooked the song she made for her brothers. 'Maybe a preliminary audience would be a good idea' she thought as she stood up, hooking her glasses onto her shirt before stepping outside to find her two sisters. She went downstairs and into the kitchen and saw both of her sisters with Yusuke, Louis and Hikaru. 

"Hello there, sister" Hikaru said, being the first to notice. 

"Hello, I was wondering if I could borrow you all as a preliminary audience. I finished the song I'm doing for Fuuto and would like some feedback" Ryuko explained. 

"Why do you want us to give you feedback?" Yusuke asked.

"Well Yusuke, the song needs to resonate with audiences across the globe, not to mention Fuuto actually liking it, to be a success. So, whoever is willing to listen may come with me to my room" Ryuko said. 

"Sure" Zerin said. 

"Alright" Ema said. 

"You can count me in" Hikaru said. 

"Me too" Louis said.

"I guess I'll come too" Yusuke said. All of them got up and followed Ryuko to her room. Zerin, Ema, and Louis sat on the bed while Hikaru and Yusuke stood next to them. 

"Alright, here we go" Ryuko said taking her place in front of her keyboard, glasses on, and started playing the song from the beginning. 

"So what do you both think of the song for Fuuto? Do you think he'll like it?" Ryuko asked. 

"I do not think he'll like it..." Zerin began. Ryuko stared at her with baited breath.

"I think he'll love it" Zerin exclaimed. 

"I agree with Zerin. I think Fuuto will love it too" Ema said. 

"Yeah, I don't think that brat deserves a song by Ryuko" Juli said, Zerin chuckled at Juli's words.