devil's advocate | (g)idle

banishment

Hey guys!

Regarding the story I was thinking of making, I have created a prompt for it, so please tell me what you think. I have a sequel coming out for my other story--"Never say never"---as well, so there will hopefully be an influx of new stories. (I know I already posted this on my other story, but I wanted some opinions from here as well lol)

I'm also maybe thinking of creating an Ao3 account, where I would do short stories, or one shots, as I would like to practice descriptiveness in my writing. Please let me know what you guys think of this, as well, and whether you would read that!

Here is the prompt for a possible new story:

Im Nayeon, the wife of rich CEO Yoo Jeongyeon, has been murdered.

Minnie, Miyeon, Soyeon, Yuqi, and Soojin---members of the elite detective team of Seoul Metropolitan---are called upon to solve this murder, with the help of Yeh Shuhua, a specialized and respected young Psychiatrist, who also just so happens to be Seo Soojin's ex girlfriend.

This would be a crime based story, and would be rated mature. I'm not that educated in these areas, but I do have an interest in Psychiatry, and I think Shuhua would make one bomb ass doctor lmao

I'll include cameos from other groups as well, such as TWICE, BLACKPINK, Red Velvet, and Mamamoo, just to name a few.

Would you guys be interested in reading this?

Sorry for the long ass intro!

"Don't do this!"

Shuhua could hear glass breaking, as she hid behind the closet door, quivering when she sees a drunk woman throw her glass of whiskey into the wall, cutting her hand in the process, and creating a stain on the wall.

"Stop it, Tian!" The lady shouted, as Shuhua recognized the drunk woman as her mother.

"Don't tell me what to do! I already confirmed it!" Tian, Shuhua's mother, shouted back, as Shuhua winced from the loudness of her voice, peeking through the crack of the closet door to see what was going on.

"What's confirmed? Tian, talk to me!" The unnamed lady (Shuhua couldn't get a glimpse of her yet) yelled back at her, making Tian slam her hands on the table in frustration.

"Bom offered me a deal, Taeyeon, and I took it." Tian responded, as Shuhua gasped.

"Taeyeon? As in Soojin's mother--Queen of Hell? So my mom did know her too!" Shuhua thought, as her mind was racing, trying to keep up with these spurts of information.

"Why would you take it? You're a fucking demon, Tian!" Taeyeon screamed at her, attacking Tian with the venom lacing in her words.

"I belonged here until you lied to me and banished me! Remember that?!" Tian was furious, and Shuhua could see the fury swimming in her eyes, taking over her very being, as Taeyeon looked down in remorse.

"I had no choice, Tian." Taeyeon whispered, as she watched her friend break down, her hands red from slamming the table too many times.

"I can't stay here anymore, and I'm bringing Kun and Shuhua with me. I can't stay knowing that I'm still befriending a pathological liar who ruined my life, and everything that I've worked for!" Tian concluded, as she rushed out of the house, with Taeyeon yelling, begging for her to come back.