Play the game // l.r.h

Author's Note

Before we go into any of this, what did you think of my story? All critiques are very welcome - I want to be able to improve my writing.

Do you want a sequel?

And if you haven't read it yet and came here to see what I wrote about the book please read it, this may sound incredibly narcissistic but it's good I promise you.

So that's the end of the story. I think I'm going to make a sequel using one of the other girls because that way the story progresses. If anybody wanted to make their own sequel (which I doubt very much but I see a lot of accounts do this), go nuts. Just please make sure you ask me first and give me credit for the original clearly.

I thought I would tell you guys some stuff that I was going to put in the story but never did,

1. I wasn't actually sure who the fanfic was about when I started it, which was why she was so comfortable with Michael at the beginning, I wanted to give myself the opportunity to let her go with who felt right.

2. The reason Luke and Michael were fighting in the beginning was supposed to be that Michael liked Adi himself and didn't want Luke to have her, I thought that, that was a little too cliché. Plus, it would have made it 10 times more difficult to write because I would have to add a second feud.

3. Emily was supposed to be a nice person (hahahahahahahahahahahahahaha I know but it's true) but I didn't want Adi to be seen as the bad guy for taking Luke away from her.

4. I was going to go through all 3 conventions but I thought I had dragged out the story enough already

5. Calum and Violet weren't supposed to get together, neither were Michael and Lori.

6. I didn't plan on Emily being the reason for Sam being 'pregnant'

7. Adi was supposed to be the one who stayed in LA with the boys but I thought that, that would be far too cliché and predictable. Plus, there was no actual reason for it to be her the one goes with them because she wasn't exactly all 'buddy, buddy' with Luke at the time and Ashton and Sam being the only ones who had something that constitutes a relationship.

8. When Adi got stuck in the apartment, she was supposed to get caught

9. I was going to end the story when Adi told Luke she loved him but I wanted to add drama with Emily coming through the door. As you can probably see, I got a little carried away.

10. Violet was actually supposed to die but then I thought 'wtf is wrong with you, pull yourself together and save this girls life'. And then I did. And might I say, I really am a true hero.

11. I didn't write any authors notes for the chapters when Violet was in hospital or she may have died because, even though she's a fictional character, it felt wrong to make jokes at the end of the chapter. It felt disrespectful and I didn't want it to be. Plus, it would've detracted from the story and I didn't want that.

12. I had absolutely no plotline for this story, I just made it up as I went along and I think it went pretty well to be honest with you. I never intended for this to be uploaded to wattpad. I just wrote it to see if I could, and I could, so I went for it. I'm glad I did.

Thank you for reading, I love you a lot. I genuinely didn't think that anybody would read this, I just posted to see what would happen and even though most chapters only got 1 read I'm still amazed that just 1 person did read.

I'm going to be writing another fanfic pretty soon, whether or not it's a sequel, we will have to find out. I'm expecting it to be a lot better because at the beginning of this story, let's be honest. It sucked. It really did. Which is probably why I got more reads on my first chapter than anything else because people were like 'Well this first chapter sucks, the rest of the book probably does too. Ew.' And then they stopped reading. And if you're one of those people and you're here to see what I wrote about the book after it was finished, READ THE BOOK. THIS MIGHT SOUND REALLY BIG HEADED BUT THE DRAMA IS SO GOOD.

If you have any questions feel free to message me or comment on the book.

I'm kinda sad it's over and I don't want to stop typing, I feel like I have so much more to say but I really don't... That's it for my first ever fanfic, I guess. It's been real.

If you want a sequel, please let me know my lovelies and I will happily write one.

Follow me on twitter if you want, @oakleyhemmings and I will follow you right back.

Or ask me something on tumblr, www.angrysos.tumblr.com

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I love you

Aight

Peace

-angrysos