ezekiel: there is really nothing you can do to improve ezekiel. he fits his role in the franchise perfectly, the first boot. however, the zombie plot was a bit of a reach.
eva: she needs more screentime. her personality is valuable and underutilized and she would make a great villian given the circumstances.
noah: he changes too much and without any reason. it would be fine if we got a slow drawn out change of some traits because of a blossoming friendship with owen, but it was hardly acknowledged. noah turned from a stuck up, self absorbed, genius, to a comical one-liner, to a awkward love-eyed loser. it doesnt work. he needs more consistency. he should've kept his island personality and thats on that. no relationships either.
justin: he needs to be more successful. he gets immediately drowned out by alejandro because they are very similar and alejandro gets a better written plotline, despite justin being first. instead of making a character to replace him they shouldve done better work with him from the start. acknowledge how he feels about his own self and acknowledge more relationships with other characters. he shouldnt have gotten a crush on courtney either.
katie: screentime apart from sadie and more screentime in general.
tyler: give him a plotline. also have him break up with lindsay for her not remembering him pls. no offscreen breakup. i want tyler to recognize his self worth and recognize he deserves someone who remembers him.
cody: have him recognize his faults and mature. he had the perfect chance to recognize what he was doing to gwen was wrong in world tour because he was receiving similar treatment from sierra. he shouldve manned up and apologized and then went home. also, he had no right to get that far in world tour.
beth: don't make her disgusting in action. dont give her the boyfriend plot. proving everyone wrong and proving shes a talented person is great, but she doesnt need a relationship to do that. ace beth supremacy.
sadie: screentime apart from Katie and more screentime in general. they had the perfect chance to do this in island.
courtney: less screentime. less drama. she was fine beforr they started shoving plots down her throat.
harold: harold is peak character writing.
trent: screentime apart from gwen so he could develop a personality on his own. i'm completely fine with the nine plot as long as it was explained or written better. i want to hear about how trent submerges parts of himself to appeal to the crowd. please. total drama make it happen.
bridgette: no aftermath. no cheating.
lindsay: i hate lindsay yall i cant write this without changing her entire personality. making her less sexualized is a start tho.
dj: animal plot was drawn out too long, other than that is fine.
izzy: dont abuse owen please?
geoff: no aftermath.
leshawna: more character development and character alignment. needed to interact with more people other than heather. also remove the whole afro hair plot thing. like that was way too offensive and racist to be on a show for like impressionable kids.
duncan: ugh *snorts cocaine and beats duncan with a sledgehammer*
heather: make her villian arc in island less noticable. it was unrealistic how she lasted that long and read gwen's diary in the fourth challenge.
gwen: BOYFRIEND KISSER. but yeah just make her be a loyal friend. keep her away from duncan.
owen: i'm so sick and tired of tv shows always writing fat characters as a food obsessed farting comical idiot. what is wrong with u. please. why is being fat a joke. why is owen written like this. why does television always do this. it's so annoying. please just remove the whole character or remove the food/farting, it isnt funny.
sierra: less creepy! have her learn from her mistakes! or just remove the whole cody obsession! he was violated every three seconds. if their genders swapped.... holy shit. and yes i will bring serious topics in a td rant book! if the genders were swapped shed be classified as a literal s/xual ass/ulter! ACKNOWLEDGE IT TD COMMUNITY! ACKNOWLEDGE IT CODIERRA FANS!
alejandro: no cause they needed him to do shit other than manipulate woman and be in love with heather because by the end of the season the only personaloty trait left was him being hispanic.
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can you guys from fanon/canon ships under here pls. i did this before but basically i'll just share my full opinions on them bc a lot has changed.
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Casualethought i should make a random book for a while, and now i decided to go through with it. enjoy.
