Hello, peoples! It's me again, here with a new chapter. Now, normally I would just lazily write stuff down (as I very clearly did with my incredibly cringe-filled Mario story way back when--I do plan on giving it a well-deserved revamp, have patience), but this chapter happens to be the one where I really shake things up. What do I mean by that, you ask? Read on and find out! One more thing, though: I know this story is definitely not going to turn out as long as the first Miitopia story I did, but I'm making up for that by giving you some more content in the near future, the next story being either a Sonic Forces rewrite that I've been working on OR a story involving my Sonic OC that is NOT for Forces. But first you'll have to survive this banger of an ending. (And before anyone asks, no, I'm not going to pull a Harry Potter on you. That was probably the scariest thing ever.)
Miitopia belongs to Nintendo, enjoy! No comments, please and thank you!
"Hey, is it just me," said Cadence as the team grouped back together, save for the ones who had gone to Regret, "or is the moon a lot bigger than it was a few hours ago?"
"Now that I think of it, it does seem much larger," Lazarus observed. "Vhat do you think that means?"
"Wouldn't you like to know!" replied The Eternal's voice, making everyone tense up. "You wish to see your world again? Why don't I grant that desire?"
There was a bright flash, and everyone was returned to their bodies. Another flash teleported the descendants of The Elite, who were now miraculously conscious, to that area. But there were only the ones of earth, fire, and light with them, so that made three... four counting the one of wind, Harmoni... there was supposed to be seven!
"Uh-oh..." Akira choked out, his face ghostly white.
Janice stumbled toward them, looking as if she was about to throw up or pass out at the same time, and she shook violently as her appearance rapidly flashed between her true self and the persona they were all familiar with. She looked like she wanted to say something, but suddenly she was still... and ever so slowly, her hair loosened from its ponytail and an insane evil grin appeared on her face. All was quiet as she brandished her sword and raised her arms, releasing a powerful blast of magic with a yell of effort. Everyone was knocked backward and the souls of the first Elite popped into existence beside their descendants, all looking completely mortified at what was happening.
"We're too late..." Harmoni looked around frantically, noticing those who were not present. "Wait! Where's everyone else?!"
"Oh, yes, about that," The Eternal mocked. "I did you a favor and... disposed of them for you."
"You're a monster!" Ambre screamed, trying to run and slap her hard across her smug face. The Eternal, however, simply lifted a finger and zapped her back to where she started.
"Name-calling... so childishly rude." That menacing grin reappeared on her face as Janice's armor changed to better suit her evil twin. Her sleeves and the end of her cape gained Japanese symbols translating to "I am anything, I am everything, I am Eternal", and her sword became longer and sharper than it was before. Her hair let itself out of its ponytail and blew wildly in the wind, and most terrifying were her eyes, The Eternal's eyes.
"Tremble before me, you foolish, puny mortals!" The Eternal's voice filled the air threateningly...it didn't belong to Janice. "The Eternal...is once again...REBORN!"
Another huge shockwave sent them all right back to the ground, and Akira's mind raced. Without all of The Elite's descendants... what could they do!?
"Get up!" Ricky yelled at him, using his Hurricane move. "Do you WANT to die, or are you going to take a stand?"
"He's right!" Harmoni urged them. "We can't let her take anything more away from us... we fight for the sake of this world, and for Janice!"
"FOR JANICE!" all of them shouted in unison, charging toward their target.
BEGIN BATTLE!
Enemy Target: The Eternal
Enemy Health Points: 2,500
Party Health Points: 3,000 (Akira), 2,500 (Ethan), 2,000 (Apollo), 900 (Cadence), 850 (Teresa), 2,000 (Scarlette), 1,000 (Cameron), 900 (Antonia), 1,500 (Ricky), 2,000 (Trinity), 1,000 (Lazarus)
Akira attacks using Mega Explosion. "Take this, you monster!" The Eternal loses 150 HP.
Ethan attacks using Mega Lightning. "Let her go!" The Eternal loses 300 HP.
Apollo attacks using Aura. "Give Janice back!" The Eternal loses 200 HP.
Cadence attacks using Flambé. "Take THAT!" The Eternal loses 600 HP.
Teresa attacks using Cat's Paw. "MeOUCH!" The Eternal loses 300 HP.
Scarlette attacks using Punishing Pitchfork. "We'll stop you!" The Eternal loses 600 HP.
Cameron attacks using Wild Shot. "Sorry, Janice!" The Eternal loses 100 HP.
Antonia attacks using Double Royal Wave. "We'll save you, my friend!" The Eternal loses 200 HP.
Ricky attacks using Hurricane. "The final blow!" The Eternal loses 50 HP.
"You can't defeat me! I'VE ALREADY WON!" The Eternal screams as a blinding light engulfs everything.
Team Akira wins!
END BATTLE!
Yet another curb-stomp battle, and the guardian isn't even here to allow you to swap characters? And there's no partner system so the guest characters are doing literally nothing? I know, a lot of this chapter is screwed up, but I intended on doing that... hee hee! You guys have no idea what I just did for the story! (Well, at least until the next chapter is released.)
Anyway, let me just say this now: I can confirm that my next story is 100 percent going to be an introduction to my Sonic fan character NOT FOR SONIC FORCES. Yes, I technically have 2 OCs, but one of them was created specifically for that game (and as such, the rewrite I have planned), while the other is for the series in general. I won't spoil anything, but I will clarify which game it's set in: it will take place during the events of Sonic Adventure 2. So get ready, y'all!
Peace out! No comments!
YOU ARE READING
Miitopia 2: Rise of the Shadow Queen
FanfictionIt has been two weeks since the defeat of the Dark Lord, but already there is a new threat to Miitopia: The Shadow Queen Kojima, who seeks to awaken The Eternal, about which Janice is not told anything. On top of that, Kojima strikes Janice's heart...
