The Old House[ON HOLD]

Chapter 1

Thank you for the love on Intro and Character Sketch...
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It's shown 2 girl, a boy and an elderly man and woman having dinner.

Man:- So how was you trek guys??

Boy:- Bahut maza aya Chachu

Woman:- Wah Arsh!! And what about you girls? Aashna Ashi what about you?

Ashi:- Yes aunty it was fun. In boys ne bahut masti ki thi

Aashna:- Ha... (Signs Arsh to ask)

Arsh:- Chachu hum jab vapas aa rahe the we saw that house again

A.D(Aashna's Dad):- Which house?

Ashi:- Wo city se dur haina ekdum purana ghar. Around 100 saal purana dikh raha tha.

Arsh:- So Manav ne suggest kiya ki if hum andar jake dekhe to...?

A.M(Aashna's Mom):-(Scared) Tum andar to nahi gaye??

Arsh:- Nahi nahi chachi hum andar nahi gaye but me puchu kyu nahi jaa sakte?

A.D:- Nahi ja sakte ek baar keh diya na

Aashna:- Par dad kyu?? Esa kya hai ki nahi jaa sakte? Kuch reason to hoga na...

A.D:-(Angry) NO MEANS NO(Left)

A.M:- Bacho tumhe pata haina unka gussa. Me jaati hu tum log fir ye topic mat nikalna

Ashi:- Ok aunty...(A.M left)

Arsh:- But ye mana kyu kar rahe?

Aashna:- Pata nahi kuch to reason hogana

Ashi:- Ha yaad hai waha board bhi tha with the danger sign and likha tha don't cross☠️.

Arsh:- Ha mene and Tanzeel ne uski pic bhi khichi hai aur waha name plate ki... Naam kuch Anna Marie tha and niche year bhi likha tha kuch but thik se nahi dikh raha tha

Scene shifts to another house where a boy and girl are shown having dinner also with their parents...

Man:- So Unnati tum kuch puchne vali thi mujhe beta

Unnati:- Uh... Vo dad(Signs the boy)

Boy:- Wo hum jab trek se aa rahe the tab...

Woman(Cuts off):- Ha Sanku beta tumhare trek kesa tha? Maze kiya tum logone?

Sanket:- Ji mom humne bahut maze kiye. Wo jab hum return ho rahe the tab we saw that house so Arshlala ne suggest kiya hum andar jake dekhe...?(As said in intro Sanket lives with Unnati since childhood so he calls them Mom n dad)

U.D:- Tum logoko kitni baar mana kia hai wo ghar ke baare me puchne ke liye

Unnati:- Par hum jaate...

U.M:- Nahi kahana a ye topic nahi nikalna chahiye... Ab shanti se khao

Unnati(Signs):- Kya?

Sanket(Signs):- Mujhe kya pata?

U.D coughs and they stop and continue to eat...

Next scene shifts to another house where two boys were sitting having dinner but more of fighting and their parents with them.

Boy 1:- Mummy ye humesha mere pasta me ketchup daal deta hai

Boy 2:- Esa hai ye lo aur ketchup khao

Boy 1:- Tanzu you know I hate ketchup. Ab le tu bhi kha

Tanzeel:- Manavbhai ketchup nai

M.M:- Chup ho jao. Ab tum dono ketchup vala hi khao varna mat khana

Manav:- Par...(M.M gave death glare) Accha thike... Dad wo ghar haina town ke bahar waha jaane kyu allowed nahi hai?

Tanzeel:- Ha aur Sanku bol raha tha abhi vacation khatam nahi hua to kal vaha make dekhe andar...(A/N:- Ye dekho Arsh ne Manav ka naam, Sanku ne Arsh and Tanzeel ne Sanku na naam liya🤦😂)

M.D:- Tum dono ko mana kiya hai na...

Manav:- Ha ha sorry...(After dinner both left)

Tanzeel:- Bhai aapne kyu aage baat nahi ki?

Manav:- Tu dad ka gussa jaanta haina... Vo jaane ko mana karte hi but Dante usse bhi zyada

Tanzeel:- Ha thike...

Everyone dozed of to sleep with a question in mind ke "Why can't they even talk about that house?"

To be continued
A/N:- I know chapter chota hai but am gonna try and update everyday(My guts🤭). Wish me luck but mene teen chaar to chapter likhe hai to tension nahi hai...

Double update??🤔(Target:- 15 votes and 35 comments)

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~Siya🌸💗