Time for a re-write??

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Yeah sooooo....not really liking Bloom (Luffy x reader). I read over it again and there were plenty of places for improvement.

So what I'm getting at is, maybe I'll re-write it into something better? Idk what do you guys think? I might end up doing it regardless but I'm curios to know what you guys have to say.

Anyway that's all for now, thanks for reading~

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