K so I was just wondering what you guys think of how I'm doing with this story. Not many people comment so I have no idea what you guys think. Please comment with any advice or just anything so I know how I'm doing.
Thanks a bunch!
-Destiny

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More Than Your King (Thorin Oakenshield love story)
FanficMy name is Marina. I and half Elf and half Dwarf. I have been summoned to join the company of Thorin Oakenshield on a quest to reclaim Erebor. Through many dangers love seems to seep its way into my heart again, only this time in the form of a stubb...