Okay This is a new story. This is going to be a mystery and i really want your oppinion on the start of it. I have not written a mystery so please help me out. Please waste 5 minutes on my story and comment what your thought are on the story and if i should continue it or not and please vote they motivate me.
I did my hair in a French braid adding a little blood red bow at the end. I opened the door to my room. “See you after school mom.” I uttered loudly. I listened to the ruffling of utensils in the kitchen. The smell of bacon and eggs drifted towards my room filling my nostrils with the mouth watering smell.
“Oh princess did I forget to tell you. I have a business trip this week. I’ll see you on Monday and please promise no fighting or getting in trouble.” She yells louder than she should. She has always had a loud voice and uses it every chance she’s got.
“Okay Mommy.”
“You mean okay for all of them or just for the first one.” She asked knowing the double meaning in my words.
“Yes.” I say cunningly.
“Don’t be a smart ass.” She hooted. I started giggling until I heard someone quietly walking up the stairs. I have very good ears. I ran into my room and tried locking the door but my mother was already in the room. She was advanced towards me her hands in the tickling positions. I back away from her just to be meet by the walls of my room. I had nowhere to go so I close my fate and took my fate like a woman.
“Okay mom I promise to be good. No fighting or getting in trouble just stop with the torture. I can’t take it anymore.” I said through my fits of laughter.
“Well that’s good enough for me.” She said while flattening her grey plaid skirt. She smile showing off her perfect pearly white teeth. She opened her arm wide and I walked and gave her a hug. “I love you my little Panther.”
“I love you too mommy.”
“Now I have to go so be good okay don’t give Nancy any trouble.” I roll my eyes and nod my head. I watched her walk out the front door and then went to the kitchen. I was eating when I the noise hit me. The loud screeching tires sliding on the hard grey concrete floated to my ears. I dropped the fork that was in my hand and ran outside. As I caught the sight outside tear start to accumulate. My hands went to my mouth to muffle the sobs. There in front of me I saw my mother’s car and only hers crashed into a fallen tree. The large tree had fallen on the driver’s side hitting at a perfect angle so that it would instantly kill the driver. I couldn’t believe my mother was dead so I ran to the car and glanced at the driver’s side. I can see her chest moving just a bit. She had moved somewhat and avoided some of the tree. I ran to the passenger’s side and opened the door. I tried pulling my mother but she was stuck.
“Mel—Melanie.” A whisper came out of my mother’s mouth and I felt someone cold bloddy hand on my face.
“Shhh don’t talk. Don’t waste your energy. I’m getting you out of here.” I said in between fits of tears. Her head shakes slowly.
“Ju... Just re...re...remember that I…I love you and .” Her voice became softer. She sounded as if she were in pain. “th…that this was…n’t an acci—.” The hand that had been reassuring me she was alive fell and the hoarse voice became silent. The sounds of the ambulance came but I wasn’t listening. I was too busy hysterically crying and clutching my dead mother to me trying to find some warmth in her. I felt a hand tug at me trying to force me away but I refused to let my mother go. It took two men to get me to leave my mother. While the paramedics were dragging me away I saw him. He stood out from the other bystander. He was just in his teens 18 maybe 19. He had light brown hair with golden blonde highlights. His eyes a piercing and very light shade of turquoise. He was good looking but that wasn’t what made him stand out. It was the fact that although his eyes showed no expression his lips were twisted into a cynical smile. And from that I knew that he was the person who murdered my beloved mother and I swore to get revenge on him and all of their kind.
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