My Witch of an Aunt (Emily's Original)

Thoughts?

You can be honest and put down your opinions of this- honestly, once you read this and then compare this side by side with the other story that is very similar and has near to almost the same plot, just with quite a bit of changes but not enough to change the solid plot, it's uncanny, and makes you think about how people write things.

However, the entire time, when I first read the original story, I was laughing my ass off about how the plot progresses. Because even though the author was like, what, 13 when she wrote this? If I were to be shown this and told she wrote it at 17 and was intending to publish it, there would and is a lot of work to be done with it. I posted it here because there's barely anybody else who will go out of their way to read it, and I don't think the original will go anywhere, but anyway.

I just hope you got a good laugh like I did out of reading the original after reading the edited version beforehand, because everytime I read this I get a good laugh. Being honest, when I was posting these parts, all I was doing was copy and pasting after I spell and grammar checked the whole document "blind".

I say blind, because I only paid attention to missing words, misspelled words, and grammar that borderline doesn't make sense without an extra word or what have you. So I have no idea what the plot is past maybe chapter 10? At the earliest? Because I suppressed everything into longer chapters. So yeah, I just hope you got a good laugh, I know I'll seriously sit down one day and read these side by side when I forget I even edited it and got sent it.

Alright, go do something productive with your life than read an 8th graders witch novel, I know I'll keep editing any stories people send to me because that's what I find entertainment out of :)