REWRTIES!!

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Hello wonderful beautiful people! 

I'm so proud to announce the prologue of the rewrite for this book :) 

Here are my reasons for rewriting: 

- MENTAL HEALTH - i wrote those stories when i was around 11/12, and at that age i was misinformed on the realities of mental health and how to accurately represent it. looking back on those stories, i sound rly stupid like it sounds like a 12yr/old wrote that bs, and so i wanted to cut major parts of those books because i didn't accurately represent such sensitive matters and it feels wrong to not try to fix it now!

*if those stories ever made anyone uncomfortable, i would gladly take them down, however i've kept them up because i've grown sentimental about something that was such a big achievement for me at the time

- CHARACTERS: my writing style has improved a lot! and my character development wasn't the greatest back then. y/n i find was annoying, the characters all LIVED by a certain stereotype and never grew out of it, etc.

- SENSITIVE TOPICS: my books dealt a whole lot with death. while writing angst is still one of my absolute favorite things to write about, i know how to do it better now. idk but i also found there are moments that just seem very ignorant and insensitive to important matters, and i was so misinformed and naive back then and looking back i just cringe so hard.

- PLOT: while the original ideas of the plot had potential, they always got swooped up by something different and something angsty or stupid or cheap. the way i plot my stories is a lot stronger than it used to be, and so i'd be cutting a big few chunks (more than, probably) out of the original plots and just using the basic outline for these books, as well as the same title.

i hope these things make sense, and i hope that i can fix my misinterpretations and write a better book! thank you all so much!

You can find the prologue of the rewrite on my profile :) 


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