I mean it - Kazuscara highschool au

^why is this pic so funny to me

Hello :)

I kinda wanna rewrite this since it has.. A lot of grammar mistakes-
I'm not going to change the plot, just rewrite some sentences.

But.. Whenever I correct something I noticed that the comments in that paragraph are.. Gone.

Is it just me or do they reappear or what did I do wrong 😭
I don't want to delete them TvT.

So
That's why I didn't correct those mistakes.
And bc I cringe when I read my own writings-
Pls help--

Thanks to everyone who read this <3