Good day everyone! Happy 2024!
I came back to this book recently and oh my god. That was cringe as hell.
What if I told you I wrote this book when I was twelve?
Yeah.. since this fic is three years old now, I figured I'd rewrite it!
I've noticed some things that made reading this story a drag:
-focuses more on the story rather than yn x kurapika (my apologies, thats what you guys are here for, no?)
-Is rushed in many aspects, but is also basically a retelling of the anime with yn inserted so also a pain to read?
-took too long to feature kurapika again!
I want to make this story better, especially since a literal child wrote this beforehand and I want to perfect it since the story is well thought out.
I've noticed a lot of people complain about the way it is written in the comments, so please let me know what you would like to see in the remake :)
Thank you,
-Hanadzuka <3
YOU ARE READING
Kurapika Kurta x Fem!reader
FanfictionYou grew up in a group of Shinobi, who were all slaughtered when you were just twelve years old. After years of thought, you decided to take the Hunter exam to fight for your family. Soon enough, you meet Kurapika. Where will this lead?
